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Forever Till the End of Time

~Forever till the end of time~ Once upon a time…this day As sleep negates a dreamless plight A spell now cast of evil pure Through bramble thorns of deadly bite ~ For on this ghostly landscape stark Wicked bending branches spy A maiden still of forest keep Beneath a watchful raven’s eye ~ Fruited fears consumed in spite Poisoned as is lonely hearts An aftermath of destined love In shadows deep it now departs ~ Frantic with his feathers full His tiny heart in worry broke Horizon’s scanned for any sign It’s then his squawking voice it spoke ~ “Fight this spoil my precious one As I shall fly of taken rest Seeking but the fortune’s fall Castled deep my storied quest” ~ When in time a prince he shouts “Beauty slumbers misted floor Where a kiss upon her lips Breathes in life to her once more” ~ Upon his steed of christened white Blazing fast and sure of way Love shall guide his cherished plea Never more to run astray ~ When in the fog of deadly deed Beauty on his eyes does call Cherished as a whispered wish Upon his knees in rapid fall ~ Tears do moisten yearning cheeks A kiss upon her he does place As lips now part the angered seas of loveliness his heart does trace ~ An aura glows in golden sheen As slowly she begins to stir Her eyes they open and she sees A prince now looking down on her ~ Then gazes ‘pon a wilting tree A smile paused, her face does send A thank you to her raven guard For in his strength she can depend ~ “Fair maiden, every dawning morn” The prince he spoke in whispered rhyme “My soul, your beauty now is born I’ve come this day to make you mine” ~ The raven winked, then spread his wings Took to the sky of misted haze Then sent to her in cackled tone A farewell in euphoric phrase ~ “When dreams concede to feel his touch Sweet as any fragrant vine Now In his arms to spend your life Forever till the end of time” 1/24/17 Written for the Once Upon A Time Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 2/11/2017 2:29:00 AM
Congrats!!! Chris...beautifully portrayed...god bless...^WW^
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 12:05:00 PM
Thank you so very much WW
Date: 2/10/2017 7:16:00 PM
Chris, this was a wonderful fairytale thank you for entering my contest. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 12:05:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your kindness Eve
Date: 1/25/2017 12:43:00 AM
My comment disappeared 0.o ... I wrote a whole story lol.... Anyway, not going to do that again, but I DO wish you good luck in the contest :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/25/2017 9:38:00 AM
Thanks anyway Darren, it's the thought that counts. :) I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 1/24/2017 5:10:00 PM
This is one fine fairy tale sonnet. Beautifully crafted and wonderful rhyme and rhythm. It was Sleeping Beauty all over again. A big 7 from me Chris. Bravo. Good luck in the contest. A winner for sure in my book. God Bless, JB
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Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 5:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Judy for your kindness. I appreciate you stopping by today to read my poem. I am thrilled you enjoyed it.
Date: 1/24/2017 2:41:00 PM
Nice fairy tale poem here. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 2:43:00 PM
Thanks so very much Matthew. I think it is a little too Sleeping Beautyish, but it's worth a try.
Date: 1/24/2017 12:15:00 PM
Always and forever-Such a lovely story...Makes me think of it being in a disney movie..Ill watch it..No matter my age :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 12:22:00 PM
Thanks so very much my sweet friend. No matter how old??? Well, I like that, your comment has made me smile. :)
Date: 1/24/2017 11:40:00 AM
A wondrous fairy tale...good luck
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Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 12:21:00 PM
Thanks so much Tim for your kindness
Date: 1/24/2017 11:20:00 AM
Excellent Chris, what a great read :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 12:21:00 PM
Thanks so much Gary
Date: 1/24/2017 11:17:00 AM
WoW! Chris, what an amazing story. It had my undivided attention. I love happy endings. It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 12:20:00 PM
Thank you so very much Alexis for your wonderful comments today. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 1/24/2017 10:34:00 AM
I have a feeling this will do really well in the contest, Chris! Really well /|\
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Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 12:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Rick. I appreciate you saying so.

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