Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Rhyme

Forever So Long

Forever so long





As warmth shows on rosy cheeks
and heart beats in rhyme,
Springs bloom in autumn 
the nature teaches mime,

Red running in veins deepens 
as fierce longings burn,
Etched abysmal in souls
memories treasured in time return.




Written March 16th, 2016
For contest "Famous last line" by Laura loo
Last line chosen from poem below...

Entwined


In pure love entwined
the knittings of a mother,
Through icy cold winds
embrace child's subtle being,
As warmth shows on rosy cheeks.


Tanka- 5/7/5/7/7
Written Feb 12th, 2016
For contest "Entwined" by Broken wings
6th place win


Forever so long poem written on March 16th, 2016
Now entered for "Old or new- 8 lines max" poetry contest by Rick Parise

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Pashang Salehi April 1, 2016 at 12:15 PM Congratulations dear Doctor...

Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2016 at 11:49 PM Hi Dr Upma, I meant LINDA, not Lina. LOL... PD

Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2016 at 11:41 PM Dr Upma, Congratulations on your awesome "Famous last line win." ~LINA~

Eve Roper March 18, 2016 at 7:56 PM Dr. Upma A. Sharma |, congratulations on Laura’s Famous Last Line Contest win! Hug Eve

Jan Allison March 18, 2016 at 4:33 PM beautifully penned Dr Sharma many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight March 18, 2016 at 2:53 PM Lovely, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your nice placement. Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong March 18, 2016 at 4:07 AM This is excellent Dr. Big congrats on your wonderful win. Loved the repeating lines! #7

Anisha Dutta March 17, 2016 at 11:27 PM Congrats Upma on big win. Love. Anisha D

Joyce Johnson March 17, 2016 at 11:10 PM Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce

Laura Leiser March 17, 2016 at 5:36 PM Congrats on your win, Dr. Upma :)

Charlie Smith March 17, 2016 at 5:14 PM Beautiful Dr. Upma, congratulations

Vladislav Raven March 17, 2016 at 4:55 PM Hi Dr. Upma, congratulations on your win in the contest. I did enjoy both these reads. Congratulations once more....Vlad.

Beautiful Scars March 17, 2016 at 11:40 AM Dr. Upma, thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo *smiles*

Daniel Turner March 16, 2016 at 12:47 PM You express your thoughts very well, Doc. Love the poem. It is very warm. Peace my friend:)