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Forever So Long

Forever so long As warmth shows on rosy cheeks and heart beats in rhyme, Springs bloom in autumn the nature teaches mime, Red running in veins deepens as fierce longings burn, Etched abysmal in souls memories treasured in time return. Written March 16th, 2016 For contest "Famous last line" by Laura loo Last line chosen from poem below... Entwined In pure love entwined the knittings of a mother, Through icy cold winds embrace child's subtle being, As warmth shows on rosy cheeks. Tanka- 5/7/5/7/7 Written Feb 12th, 2016 For contest "Entwined" by Broken wings 6th place win Forever so long poem written on March 16th, 2016 Now entered for "Old or new- 8 lines max" poetry contest by Rick Parise

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Date: 4/1/2016 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations dear Doctor...
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Date: 3/20/2016 11:49:00 PM
Hi Dr Upma, I meant LINDA, not Lina. LOL... PD
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Date: 3/20/2016 11:41:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your awesome "Famous last line win." ~LINA~
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Date: 3/18/2016 7:56:00 PM
Dr. Upma A. Sharma |, congratulations on Laura’s Famous Last Line Contest win! Hug Eve
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Date: 3/18/2016 4:33:00 PM
beautifully penned Dr Sharma many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/18/2016 2:53:00 PM
Lovely, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/18/2016 4:07:00 AM
This is excellent Dr. Big congrats on your wonderful win. Loved the repeating lines! #7
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Date: 3/17/2016 11:27:00 PM
Congrats Upma on big win. Love. Anisha D
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Date: 3/17/2016 11:10:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/17/2016 5:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Dr. Upma :)
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Date: 3/17/2016 5:14:00 PM
Beautiful Dr. Upma, congratulations
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Date: 3/17/2016 4:55:00 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, congratulations on your win in the contest. I did enjoy both these reads. Congratulations once more....Vlad.
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Date: 3/17/2016 11:40:00 AM
Dr. Upma, thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/16/2016 12:47:00 PM
You express your thoughts very well, Doc. Love the poem. It is very warm. Peace my friend:)
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