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Forever Rush

Laying right here next to you is the sweetest, most intense rush. I get the feeling and then it goes to the ultimate extreme. I cant move as we breathe each other in. This could never be described with words, it could only be understood by the same feeling, which is why everything is so easy with you. Looking into your eyes has never been as thrilling as it is tonight. Getting lost in them is like jumping off of the highest building. No matter how hard you make me fall for you, i'm high beyond belief. Your beauty melts me. No part of me can begin to resist you. Every bone in my body aches to feel you against them. My tounge is on fire as it moves perfectly with yours. I swear to God i can't speak because you've taken every ounce of breathe away. My fingers are craving to be tangled around yours. My heart pounds, my blood rushes through my veins, dying to be close to you. My skin gets a shocking feeling while yours is on it. We are surrounded by these four walls but our love burst through them up to the sky. With the strength of this we could move any mountain. But i'd rather stand on those mountains with you, it wouldn't be very hard because i'm already that high. Move closer and i swear we'll reach the sky, without even trying.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/8/2010 10:36:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kelsey. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2010 5:20:00 AM
I get the rush too reading you ... welcome to poetry soup, may this be the beginning of our friendship as you to meet all friends so dear, and may your talent inspire us as aspire to throne of greatness here. One love
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Date: 2/7/2010 2:20:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all ... as this delight tonight.. luv.. enjoyed the passion in this piece.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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