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Forever My Love

I know this world can take it's toll From our lives and from our gold I will be there with arms to hold Guarding the wind and bitter cold When we are blocked by a key-less lock We will twist and turn, to finally walk Into the light and let the darkness pass My love for you will be proven at last We will live forever in each others seas Run on the beaches and share our dreams The world around us can just watch in envy As our hearts transcend into our eternity Declaration of love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/18/2010 8:12:00 AM
Very nice HM for the poem, my dear friend. How are ya? You get my latest email? Your friend, JA
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Date: 6/1/2010 10:31:00 PM
Mitch, breathtakingly beautiful - Congratulations on placing in the contest – great job, YF4L, God Bless, mj
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Date: 6/1/2010 12:03:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Mitch in Constanc's contest with your wonderful write and theme... enjoy your honor.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/19/2010 9:04:00 AM
Great write Mitch.....with great rhymes....Thank You for your many comments....Larry
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Date: 5/18/2010 8:25:00 AM
Beautiful love in your wonderful lines. I specially liked the lines ' we will live forever in each others seas, Run on the beaches and share our dreams'. Great write. Love and best wishes....Ravindra.......Mitch White.
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Date: 5/18/2010 7:52:00 AM
Really admire the way you pledge your devotion in this excellent rhyme, Mitch. Wish it were easier to find this type of love. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2010 4:21:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Mitch. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 3:15:00 AM
You have the rhyme scheme down to an art form. Seemed effortless and flowed well. Excellent write.
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