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Forever More

long after 
this last song 
comes to an end 
you will dwell in my heart... 
unforgettable

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[21 Syllables]

loveromanticfree verse

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Angela Crabtree

December 11, 2020 at 5:57 PM

Very beautiful :)

Paul Callus

December 12, 2020 at 6:25 AM

Thank you Angela :) Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

April 24, 2019 at 8:59 AM

Hello Paul Callus, that is a very strong love for that person. I enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend.

Paul Callus

April 24, 2019 at 12:08 PM

Thank you, Darlene. You too enjoy your day. Regards // paul

Robert Lindley

April 17, 2019 at 8:17 PM

You my dear friend, packed so much into just twenty-one syllables! As always your poetry shines... A fav..

Paul Callus

April 19, 2019 at 1:35 PM

Thank you, Robert. Best regards to you...and happy Easter. // paul

Susan Ashley

April 16, 2019 at 8:21 PM

I admire your ability to create such passionate and sentimental beauty in so few syllables, Paul. Your poetic talent shines in this golden stroke of artistry. Warmest wishes and hugs always, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Paul Callus

April 17, 2019 at 3:20 PM

...and I admire your natural ability in giving such lovely and encouraging feedback, my friend...thank you! Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Jack Horne

April 11, 2019 at 2:47 PM

aww, this is beautiful

Paul Callus

April 12, 2019 at 4:30 AM

Thank you, Jack. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

April 9, 2019 at 6:20 PM

so sorry it did not make it through. I can't even remember that contest by now. maybe mine did not make it either, as I recall....

Paul Callus

April 10, 2019 at 1:53 AM

We get accustomed to failure as much as to success :) Have a lovely day, Andrea. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

April 7, 2019 at 2:24 PM

what a gem. Glad I looked back to find this one!

Paul Callus

April 7, 2019 at 3:04 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I quite liked his one myself:), but eventually failed to make it to the final selection. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

March 21, 2019 at 2:23 PM

If this is a tribute to someone either alive or deceased, it is breathtaking! Unforgettable, that's who you are........... an all time classic. A great deal said in few words, absolutely lovely Paul, Warm regards, Jenny

Paul Callus

March 21, 2019 at 2:44 PM

Thank you, Jenny. That song (which was not intentionally used in the poem) is a classic which has and will survive the passage of time. ~ Warm regards // paul

Arthur Vaso

March 21, 2019 at 2:40 AM

Lovely poem, you have made me curious as to the song, do you have a link?

Paul Callus

March 21, 2019 at 2:35 PM

Thank you, Arthur. Here is a link to Nat King Cole's song https://youtu.be/JFyuOEovTOE?t=1 and another one with Natalie Cole https://youtu.be/MKCyUe4syc4?t=11