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Forever More

long after this last song comes to an end you will dwell in my heart... unforgettable --------------- [21 Syllables]

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/11/2020 5:57:00 PM

Very beautiful :)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/12/2020 6:25:00 AM

Thank you Angela :) Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/24/2019 8:59:00 AM

Hello Paul Callus, that is a very strong love for that person. I enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2019 12:08:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. You too enjoy your day. Regards // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/17/2019 8:17:00 PM

You my dear friend, packed so much into just twenty-one syllables! As always your poetry shines... A fav..

Paul Callus
Date: 4/19/2019 1:35:00 PM

Thank you, Robert. Best regards to you...and happy Easter. // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/16/2019 8:21:00 PM

I admire your ability to create such passionate and sentimental beauty in so few syllables, Paul. Your poetic talent shines in this golden stroke of artistry. Warmest wishes and hugs always, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 4/17/2019 3:20:00 PM

...and I admire your natural ability in giving such lovely and encouraging feedback, my friend...thank you! Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 4/11/2019 2:47:00 PM

aww, this is beautiful

Paul Callus
Date: 4/12/2019 4:30:00 AM

Thank you, Jack. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2019 6:20:00 PM

so sorry it did not make it through. I can't even remember that contest by now. maybe mine did not make it either, as I recall....

Paul Callus
Date: 4/10/2019 1:53:00 AM

We get accustomed to failure as much as to success :) Have a lovely day, Andrea. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2019 2:24:00 PM

what a gem. Glad I looked back to find this one!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/7/2019 3:04:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I quite liked his one myself:), but eventually failed to make it to the final selection. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/21/2019 2:23:00 PM

If this is a tribute to someone either alive or deceased, it is breathtaking! Unforgettable, that's who you are........... an all time classic. A great deal said in few words, absolutely lovely Paul, Warm regards, Jenny

Paul Callus
Date: 3/21/2019 2:44:00 PM

Thank you, Jenny. That song (which was not intentionally used in the poem) is a classic which has and will survive the passage of time. ~ Warm regards // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/21/2019 2:40:00 AM

Lovely poem, you have made me curious as to the song, do you have a link?

Paul Callus
Date: 3/21/2019 2:35:00 PM

Thank you, Arthur. Here is a link to Nat King Cole's song https://youtu.be/JFyuOEovTOE?t=1 and another one with Natalie Cole https://youtu.be/MKCyUe4syc4?t=11