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Forever Miss

Sitting under this beautiful sunset Eve An owl floated on a gentle breeze Bidding Farewell to sunlit skies Flowers blossoms closed with sighs Sleep all the squirrels tried to fight Awaiting the sun to melt into night When moon's beams silvery glow Danced with stars nightly show Kissing a wish sent it up above Sealing it with my undying love Finding my love presenting my kiss Telling him his face I forever miss

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Date: 4/26/2020 9:37:00 PM
Very moving poetry, Brenda. Anyone who has ever lost a loved one can relate to this. Beautifully written. Warm wishes, John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/30/2020 7:58:00 AM
John thank you so much!;)
Date: 3/31/2020 5:50:00 PM
Nice, very nice Brenda
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/3/2020 12:11:00 AM
Edward thank you so much!;)
Date: 3/16/2020 10:25:00 PM
Delightful... and you really got me with that 'Forever Miss' title. Lovely penned, Brenda! Cheers, Gershon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/3/2020 12:10:00 AM
Ahhh Gershon thank you so much my friend!;)
Date: 3/16/2020 8:38:00 PM
Wonderful imagery here. Enjoyed.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/3/2020 12:09:00 AM
Thank you ML!;)
Date: 3/14/2020 12:19:00 PM
All rather soothing and dreamy, Brenda -- and in a really quite delightful way! Lovely little poem. My warmest wishes as ever. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/14/2020 1:29:00 PM
Thank you so much John! Your never ending support means a lot to me!;( hugs!;)
Date: 3/13/2020 9:36:00 PM
Brenda, your poem is beautifully penned, very dreamy _Constance
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/13/2020 10:07:00 PM
Ahh thank you Constance! I appreciate that! ;)

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