Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Forever Miss

Sitting under this 
beautiful sunset Eve
An owl floated on a 
gentle breeze
Bidding Farewell 
to sunlit skies
Flowers blossoms 
closed with sighs

Sleep all the squirrels 
tried to fight
Awaiting the sun to 
melt into night
When moon's beams 
silvery glow
Danced with stars 
nightly show

Kissing a wish 
sent it up above
Sealing it with 
my undying love
Finding my love 
presenting my kiss
Telling him his face 
I forever miss

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John Watt April 26, 2020 at 9:37 PM Very moving poetry, Brenda. Anyone who has ever lost a loved one can relate to this. Beautifully written. Warm wishes, John Brenda Chiri April 30, 2020 at 7:58 AM John thank you so much!;)

Edward Snyder March 31, 2020 at 5:50 PM Nice, very nice Brenda Brenda Chiri April 3, 2020 at 12:11 AM Edward thank you so much!;)

Gershon Wolf March 16, 2020 at 10:25 PM Delightful... and you really got me with that 'Forever Miss' title. Lovely penned, Brenda! Cheers, Gershon Brenda Chiri April 3, 2020 at 12:10 AM Ahhh Gershon thank you so much my friend!;)

M. L. Kiser March 16, 2020 at 8:38 PM Wonderful imagery here. Enjoyed. Brenda Chiri April 3, 2020 at 12:09 AM Thank you ML!;)

John Fleming March 14, 2020 at 12:19 PM All rather soothing and dreamy, Brenda -- and in a really quite delightful way! Lovely little poem. My warmest wishes as ever. :) john Brenda Chiri March 14, 2020 at 1:29 PM Thank you so much John! Your never ending support means a lot to me!;( hugs!;)

Constance La France March 13, 2020 at 9:36 PM Brenda, your poem is beautifully penned, very dreamy _Constance Brenda Chiri March 13, 2020 at 10:07 PM Ahh thank you Constance! I appreciate that! ;)