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Forever Loved

Tonight 
in the Heavens sky 
A journey inwards 
Begins unravelling out

Golden moondogs kiss 
Sweetheart sparkles 
Drawing one circle 
ring around a rose 

Warmly embracing silk feelings 
A slim 
milky lunar smiling vision
Sharing darkness with stars wishes fly
 
Frogs sing 
a croaking choir 
capturing one lullaby 
In the stillness of night 

Thoughts alone 
They drift away 
on a breathless air 
As your baptised in the heart 

Bathing 
in the living water 
of beauty 
Which flows from deep inside 

Salt 
you will 
always remain 
undying beautiful

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

October 6, 2016 at 7:33 AM

Liam, nice work here...you're a romantic devil yourself huh? I'm trying to become more active here...nice place to start I believe... MC

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 23, 2016 at 7:53 AM

What a fantastic poem! Congratulations my friend, Liam for being POTD! Certainly it does honor to PS to chose it!

Gary Bateman

April 21, 2016 at 3:06 PM

Liam Mate!! Congratulations on the POTD Honor here. (Looks like that Poetry Answer Key that the Irish Leprechauns gave you, helped you to make this one so very good and quite so enchanting!!) Outstanding Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Manmath Dalei

April 20, 2016 at 2:23 AM

Congrats for POTD. Lovely poem.......hugs

Cindi Rockwell

April 19, 2016 at 9:41 PM

Congrats on POTD! ~Cindi~

Jan Allison

April 19, 2016 at 6:52 PM

Many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

April 19, 2016 at 12:09 PM

Very romantic Liam...congrats on the POTD

Dorian Petersen Potter

April 19, 2016 at 10:08 AM

Hi Liam!:)) Congratulations to you on POTD!Just dazzling!You very much deserve it for sure.Very beautifully painted romantic love poem, my dearest friend Liam.Just awesome!Very heartfelt beautiful and sweet.I'm so extremely happy for you Liam:)Just enjoy your day!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Casarah Nance

April 19, 2016 at 7:46 AM

You bring powerful images "Thoughts alone They drift away on a breathless air As your baptised in the heart " I especially enjoyed that. Congrats being featured as poem of the day :)

Gary Bateman

April 18, 2016 at 5:08 AM

Hello Liam Mate!! A quite moving and totally enchanting free verse here for sure. (Looks as though the "Leprechauns" are still talking to you in the Gaelic World there!! Ha! Ha!) TR/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary (P.S. I just posted "Our Human Nature" earlier -- a Rhymed Couplet. Give it read when you can. It will not disappoint!!) GB!!

Dorian Petersen Potter

April 17, 2016 at 6:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^