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Forever Loved

Tonight in the Heavens sky A journey inwards Begins unravelling out Golden moondogs kiss Sweetheart sparkles Drawing one circle ring around a rose Warmly embracing silk feelings A slim milky lunar smiling vision Sharing darkness with stars wishes fly Frogs sing a croaking choir capturing one lullaby In the stillness of night Thoughts alone They drift away on a breathless air As your baptised in the heart Bathing in the living water of beauty Which flows from deep inside Salt you will always remain undying beautiful

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/6/2016 7:33:00 AM

Liam, nice work here...you're a romantic devil yourself huh? I'm trying to become more active here...nice place to start I believe... MC

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/23/2016 7:53:00 AM

What a fantastic poem! Congratulations my friend, Liam for being POTD! Certainly it does honor to PS to chose it!

Gary Bateman

Date: 4/21/2016 3:06:00 PM

Liam Mate!! Congratulations on the POTD Honor here. (Looks like that Poetry Answer Key that the Irish Leprechauns gave you, helped you to make this one so very good and quite so enchanting!!) Outstanding Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/20/2016 2:23:00 AM

Congrats for POTD. Lovely poem.......hugs

Cindi Rockwell

Date: 4/19/2016 9:41:00 PM

Congrats on POTD! ~Cindi~

Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2016 6:52:00 PM

Many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/19/2016 12:09:00 PM

Very romantic Liam...congrats on the POTD

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 4/19/2016 10:08:00 AM

Hi Liam!:)) Congratulations to you on POTD!Just dazzling!You very much deserve it for sure.Very beautifully painted romantic love poem, my dearest friend Liam.Just awesome!Very heartfelt beautiful and sweet.I'm so extremely happy for you Liam:)Just enjoy your day!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/19/2016 7:46:00 AM

You bring powerful images "Thoughts alone They drift away on a breathless air As your baptised in the heart " I especially enjoyed that. Congrats being featured as poem of the day :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 4/18/2016 5:08:00 AM

Hello Liam Mate!! A quite moving and totally enchanting free verse here for sure. (Looks as though the "Leprechauns" are still talking to you in the Gaelic World there!! Ha! Ha!) TR/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary (P.S. I just posted "Our Human Nature" earlier -- a Rhymed Couplet. Give it read when you can. It will not disappoint!!) GB!!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 4/17/2016 6:00:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/17/2016 5:17:00 PM

i always swoon whenever i read you, liam.. this is another one.. so lovely..huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 4/17/2016 4:55:00 PM

Such gorgeous imagery Liam I especially love the stanza about the frogs - absolutely enchanting:-) hugs Jan xx7