Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

Forever Love and Me-Collab

The winds of happiness blew a smile upon my face
It's warm breeze kissed my lips as I surrenderd to its embrace
The flowers surrounding us hugged my heart with their early rise
Laying with my love in peaceful bliss we gazed across the sunlit skies

A pillow like cloud rolling past causes a gentle sunshine rain
There's laughter in my voice as we decide to race the wind in vain
With our hearts beating fast we stop to rest underneath a tree
Embracing with sighs and tender kisses,from my love to me

This day my love will stay forever in my heart and mind
Knowing that a love like ours will never be easy to find
If I could remember a day this would be the one I long to see
A perfect day running through the fields,my forever love and me



A collaboration with Germaine Pasley :o)
Dan Kearley:12-21-11

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Michael J. Falotico December 27, 2011 at 3:28 PM Glad I stopped in to read and found this gem.. Great work the 2 of you have done!! very good... Michael

Laura Breidenthal December 26, 2011 at 8:37 PM This is very beautiful, Dan! :) I enjoyed lots! Always, Laura

Dawn Mclaughlin December 25, 2011 at 9:54 AM Dan this is so beautiful...Thank you for the comment on my poem..Merry Christmas :)

Elizabeth Wesley December 24, 2011 at 2:46 PM I think it is beautiful, just a great job from the two of you. The whole effect is gentle and romantic! :)

Dawn Mclaughlin December 23, 2011 at 4:25 AM Beautiful Dan ...Thinking i may just stay ;) Happy christmas Journey Mcknight December 23, 2011 at 2:31 PM she has her mind set on him, she's got her mind set on him.... :) doesn't bother me, all I want is Gods will, soon as she THOUGHT, well, I told her, he is famous...shes stayin'

Ninti King December 22, 2011 at 9:15 PM I don't pretend to be an expert on poetry or anything like that. I just know what I like and what I don't like. Reading your poem made me feel pleasant. It was beautiful and has an awesome warm feeling about it, it was totally dope.

Germaine Elliott December 22, 2011 at 9:02 AM fix my name you fool haha. it has an E at the end of Germaine....we work well together :) Dan Kearley December 22, 2011 at 10:08 AM Sorry about that. :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen December 22, 2011 at 5:20 AM Beautiful Dan,you are brilliant. SMILE - oxox hug Anne-Lise Dan Kearley December 22, 2011 at 10:09 AM Thank you very much :-)

Robert Pettit December 21, 2011 at 10:37 PM You and Germain did a fine job together. Dan Kearley December 22, 2011 at 10:07 AM Thank you very much.

Nancy Jones December 21, 2011 at 6:42 PM ummm.. getta room? .. lol, namaste~N Dan Kearley December 21, 2011 at 6:47 PM Ha,ha,ha,ha :oP