Forever Love

In and out of deceit, Love is what sort,
past living false existence and no sense.
With my true love for you I am bought,
in my life, warm feelings in your presence.
Our moments needless to exchange and fault
true love, our past no mirror forever.
Memorable days, new moments exalt,
time in a short we have grown together.
No longer to avoid our inner shade,
unspoken words, unknowing, we complete.
Inner passions true we cannot evade,
to becoming one with you is no feat.
Remain you, and I me, forever love,
for outgrowing all, we put us above.

09/08/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/13/2016 10:25:00 AM
Your English Sonnet was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/14/2016 12:41:00 AM
Thank you for reading my first sonnet - I appreciate your comments Sara Regards, Mark
Date: 9/11/2016 2:11:00 PM
Mark Paul, very romantically written. I really enjoyed this and feel it should've placed higher...congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/12/2016 12:16:00 AM
Thank you Luloo - I do really appreciate your comments and reading my poetry. I do however feel that there are so many amazing poets on this website and appreciate any placement whatsoever that I can achieve, I am blessed when my poems are even read. All the best and thank you for the support. Regards, Mark
Date: 9/10/2016 7:08:00 PM
Mark, congratulations on your 3rd place win, beautiful written . Hugs Eve
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/11/2016 3:01:00 AM
Thank you so much for the placement Eve - I really enjoyed writing my first sonnet. Regards, Mark
Date: 9/8/2016 5:55:00 AM
Great love sonnet Mark - The first few lines hit hard - put being you what happened in the past and be positive and move on to a wonderful future:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/8/2016 8:09:00 AM
Thank you Jan - I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading. Mark
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