Forever Love

In and out of deceit, Love is what sort,
past living false existence and no sense.
With my true love for you I am bought,
in my life, warm feelings in your presence.
Our moments needless to exchange and fault
true love, our past no mirror forever.
Memorable days, new moments exalt,
time in a short we have grown together.
No longer to avoid our inner shade,
unspoken words, unknowing, we complete.
Inner passions true we cannot evade,
to becoming one with you is no feat.
Remain you, and I me, forever love,
for outgrowing all, we put us above.

09/08/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 10:25 AM
Your English Sonnet was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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September 14, 2016 at 12:41 AM
Thank you for reading my first sonnet - I appreciate your comments Sara Regards, Mark
Scars Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 2:11 PM
Mark Paul, very romantically written. I really enjoyed this and feel it should've placed higher...congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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September 12, 2016 at 12:16 AM
Thank you Luloo - I do really appreciate your comments and reading my poetry. I do however feel that there are so many amazing poets on this website and appreciate any placement whatsoever that I can achieve, I am blessed when my poems are even read. All the best and thank you for the support. Regards, Mark
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 7:08 PM
Mark, congratulations on your 3rd place win, beautiful written . Hugs Eve
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September 11, 2016 at 3:01 AM
Thank you so much for the placement Eve - I really enjoyed writing my first sonnet. Regards, Mark
Allison Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 5:55 AM
Great love sonnet Mark - The first few lines hit hard - put being you what happened in the past and be positive and move on to a wonderful future:-) hugs Jan xx
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September 8, 2016 at 8:09 AM
Thank you Jan - I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading. Mark
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