Forever In Your Eyes

Forever in your eyes
On the darkness of June
Reserved for a love
Ever fleeting so soon
Valuable time,leaving us fast
Exacting us both,into the past
Reserving a night,for heavenly bliss
Into our last night,into our last kiss
Neither one of us knew,nor had a clue
Years are all we had,and would have to do
On forever love,we put up a fight
Usually people with cancer.still have a life
Reluctant with time,we made a deal
Eventually she would leave,when I grew ill
Yesterday we planned,our night,our last time
Even though she was sad 
She kept forever in your eyes....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/27/2016 4:11:00 AM
Congrats Anthony, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/24/2016 11:04:00 PM
Well writ, Anthony, congrats on your placement. Regards, Viv
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Anthony August
Date: 7/25/2016 12:38:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 7/24/2016 4:16:00 PM
Anthony, congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
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Anthony August
Date: 7/24/2016 10:51:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/24/2016 9:03:00 AM
Hi Anthony, You have penned a beautiful yet sad write. Congrats on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Anthony August
Date: 7/24/2016 1:12:00 PM
Thank You
Date: 7/21/2016 3:21:00 PM
Beautiful but sad acrostic - reminds me of the marriage vows till death do us part - very moving poem Anthony :-) hugs Jan xx
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Anthony August
Date: 7/24/2016 1:13:00 PM
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