Forever In Your Eyes

Forever in your eyes
On the darkness of June
Reserved for a love
Ever fleeting so soon
Valuable time,leaving us fast
Exacting us both,into the past
Reserving a night,for heavenly bliss
Into our last night,into our last kiss
Neither one of us knew,nor had a clue
Years are all we had,and would have to do
On forever love,we put up a fight
Usually people with cancer.still have a life
Reluctant with time,we made a deal
Eventually she would leave,when I grew ill
Yesterday we planned,our night,our last time
Even though she was sad 
She kept forever in your eyes....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 4:11 AM
Congrats Anthony, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
Wigley Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 11:04 PM
Well writ, Anthony, congrats on your placement. Regards, Viv
August Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 12:38 AM
Thank you
A  Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 4:16 PM
Anthony, congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
August Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 10:51 PM
Thank you
Y. Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Hi Anthony, You have penned a beautiful yet sad write. Congrats on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
August Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 1:12 PM
Thank You
Allison Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 3:21 PM
Beautiful but sad acrostic - reminds me of the marriage vows till death do us part - very moving poem Anthony :-) hugs Jan xx
August Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 1:13 PM
Thank you
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