Forever In Your Eyes

Forever, yes, forever do I want to see this warmth in your eyes,
Ordering me so gently to do as you wish, all for the sake of your love, which
Reaches out and touches me, in each of my sensual spots
Enlightening me more on the nature of my own kind, by instilling in me
Valuable teachings, teachings on eternal life, teachings on the nature of
Eternal love, even on the cause of life on Earth, pray, this warmth, how shall I 
Resist it, how shall I forsake it, how shall I 

Ignore it, even put it aside and tend to other things, to things which do last
Never but which do be for a time and do become shadows at others!

Your warmth, my muse, your gaze,  my muse
Opens up to me the gates of Heaven, opens up to me the gates of perfection
Understand you of my plight, dear Earth, understand you that I fit not here
Rather, I shall feel complete when I shall be there, where my muse does be

Eagerly serving him, eagerly loving him, eagerly making sure he is content
Yes, for other than this cause, I do have find no meaning to my life
Each day here does be my sacrifice, yes, I live for the sake of such a love!
Sincerity for such a love does make my heart beat, yes, it does!

20th July 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/28/2016 11:43:00 AM
Anoucheka, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest (sorry for the late comment) :)-luloo
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Date: 8/27/2016 11:00:00 PM
Back to congratulate you. Well done! :) Sunita
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 8/28/2016 3:10:00 AM
Hi Sunita, Thks :)
Date: 7/24/2016 11:02:00 PM
Congratulations, Anoucheka, a lovely piece. Viv
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:17:00 PM
A. G., congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
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Date: 7/24/2016 9:44:00 AM
Hi Anoucheka, The love you expressed in this piece was so divine. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/24/2016 7:49:00 AM
This is fantastic devotion to love and the loved one. Well done Anoucheka. Congrats on your win. :) Sunita
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Date: 7/20/2016 1:10:00 AM
This is true eternal love:) Well written:)
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 7/20/2016 1:17:00 AM
Thkq Jo :)
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 7/20/2016 1:16:00 AM
Thkq Jo :)
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