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Forever In Your Eyes

Finding out how much you loved me, Opened up my heart to a Reality that unconditional love really Exists. You were really ready to Volunteer to offer a kidney to me, Even when we only met once. Racing against time, I decided to walk the Isle with you, Not getting my stare off you. A trip in a Yacht in every summer, On your birthday, I would sacrifice Unconditionally. Read my lips, as Every word, as warm as the Yellow sun, drift from my lips, as your Eyes assure me that in every Season, you will be with me. Date of Entry: 7/16/2016

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Date: 7/16/2016 4:49:00 PM
wonderful poetry, amazing subject..
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/17/2016 5:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Harry!! ;-)
Date: 7/16/2016 4:05:00 PM
lovely and romantic Teddy good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/17/2016 5:28:00 AM
Thank you so much for enjoying my piece, Jan!! *^_^*
Date: 7/16/2016 3:28:00 PM
i like the sentimentalist in you, teddy... greeat stuff!.. huggs
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/16/2016 3:59:00 PM
Thanks, Nette!! *^_^* Sometimes my emotions bond with my writings....
Date: 7/16/2016 3:07:00 PM
Your Acrostic flows beautifully, Teddy, and is so romantic. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Sandra
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/16/2016 3:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Sandra, for enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Date: 7/16/2016 5:44:00 AM
Lovely:)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/16/2016 3:55:00 PM
Thanks Madhupriya!! *^_^*

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