Forever In Your Eyes

Finding out how much you loved me,
Opened up my heart to a
Reality that unconditional love really
Exists. You were really ready to
Volunteer to offer a kidney to me,
Even when we only met once.

Racing against time,
I decided to walk the Isle with you,
Not getting my stare off you. A trip in a
Yacht in every summer, 
On your birthday, I would sacrifice
Unconditionally.

Read my lips, as
Every word, as warm as the
Yellow sun, drift from my lips, as your
Eyes assure me that in every
Season, you will be with me.


Date of Entry: 7/16/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Horsman Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:49 PM
wonderful poetry, amazing subject..
Kimathi Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:29 AM
Thank you so much, Harry!! ;-)
Allison Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:05 PM
lovely and romantic Teddy good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
Kimathi Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:28 AM
Thank you so much for enjoying my piece, Jan!! *^_^*
Onclaud Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:28 PM
i like the sentimentalist in you, teddy... greeat stuff!.. huggs
Kimathi Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Thanks, Nette!! *^_^* Sometimes my emotions bond with my writings....
Haight Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Your Acrostic flows beautifully, Teddy, and is so romantic. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Thank you so much Sandra, for enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Shanmugam Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 5:44 AM
Lovely:)
Kimathi Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:55 PM
Thanks Madhupriya!! *^_^*
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