Forever In Your Eyes

Forever in Your Eyes

From the beginning, it was in your eyes
Opening your heart, mind and soul to me.
Rescuing me from myself and the loneliness inside.
Each step we took brought new emotions and promises.
Variations on a theme played in the background
Enticing and exciting every breath we took
Reaching deep into our one blended soul.

Iconical, indescribable love ingrained within a dream
Nervously given, magnificently accepted and shared.

Youthful yearnings so sincere bound in body and soul
Openly we gave and once given never taken back
United as one our love was unquenchable 
Relentless almost radioactive.

Each encounter was effortlessly evolving
Your eyes touching mine
Easing to promises of forever love
Soon lost in broken promises of a forever never to be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Hello DM Babbit , your poem is sad. A romance not meant to be. Is so sad. Have a nice day my friend.
Wigley Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 10:57 PM
A great little write, with a crushing ending, very poignant. Congrats on your placing in the contest el Babbito, Viv
A  Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Email Babbit, congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
Y. Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Hi DM, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
Allison Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 11:18 AM
beautiful but with a sad ending DM good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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