Forever In Your Eyes

Farewell, for now, my dearest sweet,
Overwhelming sadness and joy the heart speaks,
Remembering times of beauty until we’ll meet,
Embracing moments captured memories seized,
Vows forever and always complete,
Endless and everlasting emotions run deep,
Romances and kisses weep,

Intimately and affectionately held
No more tears until time comes to greet,

Yesterday and forever in your eyes,
Overcoming all unknown fears 
Undertaking life’s final journey
Regaining hope when all thoughts were lost,

Eternity following on in tomorrow’s paradise,
Years speak out words that express love,
Engaging every minute of intimacy,
Savouring together every second of time that passes.

13/07/2016
For competition 
Sponsor John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Wigley Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 10:54 PM
Probably the most sorrowful of all the entries, but lovely all the same. COngrats, Wendy, much enjoyed. Viv x
Rycroft Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 4:46 AM
Thank you VIV xx
Haight Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Wendy, congratulations on your fine win for your poem in the 'forever in your eyes contest'! Hugs, Sandra
Rycroft Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 4:45 AM
Thank you Sandra x
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July 24, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Wendy, congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
Rycroft Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 4:27 AM
Thank you Skat x
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July 24, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Hi Wendy, Congrats on your winning write: -) Alexis
Rycroft Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 3:34 PM
Thank you Alex xxx
Wigley Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 6:06 AM
Well writ, Wendy, full of sadness, the acceptance and finally, hope, that we all have when losing someone. I'm sure you will do well. Viv x
Rycroft Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 2:22 PM
Thank you Viv xxx
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July 17, 2016 at 8:00 AM
- A beautiful and romantic poems, Wendy - Good luck in the contest - I see you've posted on "my wall", but I have not F- book so I can not answer you - But, very nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rycroft Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Thank you Sunshine that's very kind of you xxxx
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 10:56 AM
It is so flowing. you used the letters of this form VERY well, WEndy. Great poem.
Rycroft Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Thank you Andrea xxx
Austin Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 9:12 AM
I especially like your first lines. daver
Rycroft Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Thank you Daver your very kind thank you xxxx
Ball Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 5:50 PM
Well done Wendy. Filled with emotion. God Bless, JB
Rycroft Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Thank you Judy x
Allison Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 10:48 AM
beautifully penned Wendy good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Rycroft Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 12:59 PM
Thank you Jan it was a hard one for me first time acrostic x
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