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Forever In Your Eyes

For thirty years our bond has held old strands becoming frayed resisting tension, threads that swelled each rainstorm our love made. visions we had early on expecting mighty things replaced with what we built upon in age's tempered rings. no need now for wild promises you put to bed our vows our lives recharged still by kisses until tomorrow's now. remember not the hungry times else we should both forget young love still lies in dormant vines ere that first day we met. Still love you, Jan , from Viv x For contest 'Forever in your eyes', sponsor John Hamilton

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Date: 7/27/2016 3:48:00 AM
Greetings Viv. Congrats for your WIN with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/27/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thanks, Teddy, appreciate it. Hope you're well. Regards, Viv
Date: 7/25/2016 5:05:00 AM
Congrats on this lovely poem x
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/25/2016 6:12:00 AM
Thanks Wendy, Viv x
Date: 7/24/2016 10:46:00 PM
Congrats, me, you old mushy sack of icky kissy-wissy. Regards, Me.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/24/2016 10:47:00 PM
Thanks, Me, appreciate you stopping by. Regards, Me
Date: 7/24/2016 5:00:00 PM
Viv, congratulations on your Third Place podium win on your poem in the 'forever in your eyes contest'! Sandra
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/24/2016 10:18:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, I'll now go back from being romantic and slushy to being my normal buffoon. Viv x
Date: 7/24/2016 4:21:00 PM
Viv, congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/24/2016 10:18:00 PM
Thanks, Skat, very kind. hope you're ticketty-boo. Viv x
Date: 7/24/2016 11:17:00 AM
Hi Viv, Congratulations on your 3 rd place win:-) Alexis
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/24/2016 10:17:00 PM
Thanks Alexis, enjoyed composing it. Viv
Date: 7/18/2016 5:06:00 PM
Flows lovely very great poem x
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/19/2016 12:37:00 AM
Thanks Wendy, appreciate you droppping by, Viv x
Date: 7/13/2016 3:27:00 PM
Oh My God....how sweet to see a love that lasts Viv.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/13/2016 5:16:00 PM
Thanks, Jean, we still have our cross words, though- I'm typing this from the doghouse x
Date: 7/13/2016 8:10:00 AM
As long as there are poets and poetry romance will stay alive. Great work always comes from the heart. regards David
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/13/2016 5:17:00 PM
Cheers, David, it can be hard work, but we're only human. Regards, Viv

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