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Forever Gone

One last sad goodbye You're standing there still afraid I tell you it's fine Soon you'll cross your obstacles, Just you'll be forever gone

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/25/2015 5:16:00 PM

Rachel welcome to PoetrySoup. Enjoyed reading your write

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/22/2015 3:19:00 AM

- Hello Rachel :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2015 12:06:00 AM

Rachel, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 10/19/2015 11:15:00 PM

Deep tanka, Rachel :) Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT