Forever For You

If I could find a way to show you the words left unsaid,
From a time when it meant most, as we moved quickly ahead
Not knowing the dark curtain would fall upon us so suddenly
Burying all we did as cruelty took a life too, unexpectedly
The black crows couldn’t call loud enough that gray winter day
When grief merged with fog and blurred everything in a way
I will never forget words left at a grave too late, spoken to a memory
Knowing we lost our chance in togetherness to finally be free
No-one could know the battle we fought and the loss now endured
Fallen upon my shoulders, a painful disease to be left uncured
Here I am, years later in ways still alone, surviving as you’d want me to
Although so much has changed, the old will never be new
And as I hear the crows call, my words return again, forever for you
Re-emerging in the fog, still with only an image of memory to speak to

Heidi Sands

7/12/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolf Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 9:02 PM
I really love this one!
Sands Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 5:53 AM
Thank you White Wolf. I appreciate your kind comment to let me know. I hope all is well :)
Theraven Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 10:23 AM
Heidi, Wonder in the mournful call of foreboding black crows. Is forever really worth the trouble without the ones we loved. -Richard
Sands Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 2:35 PM
Thank you Richard...well feelings certainly can last forever. I appreciate your visit :)
Robertson Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 2:10 PM
Lovely work.
Sands Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 2:42 PM
Thank you Milton :)
Mcconnell Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 10:35 AM
A rather fine piece excellently penned Heidi , it's so true about what unsaid words can do. Have a blessed day, Gordon
Sands Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 2:42 PM
Thank you Gordon. I appreciate your kind words. I hope your day is blessed too :)
Callus Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 8:34 AM
I am touched by this poem, Heidi. Some things are left unsaid, but in all probability we would have "said" them in other ways....by a simple look....the touch of a hand....a smile... Best regards // paul
Sands Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Thank you so much Paul. It is nice to see your comment :)
Jayasankar Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 4:36 AM
Emotional and deep Heidi... "When grief merged with fog and blurred everything... ".. " Re-emerging in the fog, still with only an image to speak to... "... Loved these lines... God bless... ~ Ani
Sands Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 9:42 AM
Thank you for your kind feedback Anitha. I appreciate it very much. I hope you have a nice day :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 4:24 PM
Hello Heidi, sorry to hear that you had unsaid words. I bet the words unsaid are stuck wanting to come out. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Hello Heidi, yes I understand this very well. I have question that are stuck and can not be answered. I know the question will be stuck unanswered. Hugs
Sands Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 9:42 AM
Hi Darlene. You understand this very well. The words unsaid do stick and always want to come out. Thank you. Hugs :)
Gentile Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 12:28 PM
This is so sad Heidi. Words left unsaid are so hurtful and a reminder to try to say what we feel while we can! Lovely poem xxoo
Sands Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Thank you for your understanding Mike. Words left unsaid with a sudden event are haunting. Yes, we must say what we feel when we can.. I appreciate your kind comment :)
Pandit Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 12:35 PM
This is truly special, Heidi. Words dwelling in loving memories--an awesome tribute to love!
Sands Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 12:46 PM
Thank you so much Vijay. Your comment means a lot to me. Much appreciated :)
Andresen Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 12:25 PM
- A realistic poem with personality and emotions, Heidi - Great written ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I appreciate your kind comment today. I hope all is well. Hugs :)
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