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Forever For You

If I could find a way to show you the words left unsaid, From a time when it meant most, as we moved quickly ahead Not knowing the dark curtain would fall upon us so suddenly Burying all we did as cruelty took a life too, unexpectedly The black crows couldn’t call loud enough that gray winter day When grief merged with fog and blurred everything in a way I will never forget words left at a grave too late, spoken to a memory Knowing we lost our chance in togetherness to finally be free No-one could know the battle we fought and the loss now endured Fallen upon my shoulders, a painful disease to be left uncured Here I am, years later in ways still alone, surviving as you’d want me to Although so much has changed, the old will never be new And as I hear the crows call, my words return again, forever for you Re-emerging in the fog, still with only an image of memory to speak to Heidi Sands 7/12/21

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Date: 7/19/2021 9:02:00 PM
I really love this one!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/20/2021 5:53:00 AM
Thank you White Wolf. I appreciate your kind comment to let me know. I hope all is well :)
Date: 7/18/2021 10:23:00 AM
Heidi, Wonder in the mournful call of foreboding black crows. Is forever really worth the trouble without the ones we loved. -Richard
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/18/2021 2:35:00 PM
Thank you Richard...well feelings certainly can last forever. I appreciate your visit :)
Date: 7/16/2021 2:10:00 PM
Lovely work.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/16/2021 2:42:00 PM
Thank you Milton :)
Date: 7/16/2021 10:35:00 AM
A rather fine piece excellently penned Heidi , it's so true about what unsaid words can do. Have a blessed day, Gordon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/16/2021 2:42:00 PM
Thank you Gordon. I appreciate your kind words. I hope your day is blessed too :)
Date: 7/16/2021 8:34:00 AM
I am touched by this poem, Heidi. Some things are left unsaid, but in all probability we would have "said" them in other ways....by a simple look....the touch of a hand....a smile... Best regards // paul
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/16/2021 2:41:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul. It is nice to see your comment :)
Date: 7/14/2021 4:36:00 AM
Emotional and deep Heidi... "When grief merged with fog and blurred everything... ".. " Re-emerging in the fog, still with only an image to speak to... "... Loved these lines... God bless... ~ Ani
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/14/2021 9:42:00 AM
Thank you for your kind feedback Anitha. I appreciate it very much. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 7/13/2021 4:24:00 PM
Hello Heidi, sorry to hear that you had unsaid words. I bet the words unsaid are stuck wanting to come out. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/14/2021 11:17:00 AM
Hello Heidi, yes I understand this very well. I have question that are stuck and can not be answered. I know the question will be stuck unanswered. Hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/14/2021 9:42:00 AM
Hi Darlene. You understand this very well. The words unsaid do stick and always want to come out. Thank you. Hugs :)
Date: 7/13/2021 12:28:00 PM
This is so sad Heidi. Words left unsaid are so hurtful and a reminder to try to say what we feel while we can! Lovely poem xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/13/2021 1:26:00 PM
Thank you for your understanding Mike. Words left unsaid with a sudden event are haunting. Yes, we must say what we feel when we can.. I appreciate your kind comment :)
Date: 7/12/2021 12:35:00 PM
This is truly special, Heidi. Words dwelling in loving memories--an awesome tribute to love!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/12/2021 12:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay. Your comment means a lot to me. Much appreciated :)
Date: 7/12/2021 12:25:00 PM
- A realistic poem with personality and emotions, Heidi - Great written ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/12/2021 12:30:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I appreciate your kind comment today. I hope all is well. Hugs :)

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