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Forever Embrace

Eager bubbling, dreams, fantasies, feelings of all sought, Stubborn, unbending, mind fixated at one thought! Never-ending, eternal love for just the”one”, The wit, that sharp tongue, those soft curls; i was won! Cuddled in the warmth of strong arms, away from the shifty world, Love grew, warmth spread, pacing time twirled! To remain in the forever embrace, till peeps a wrinkled face! 21/6/2018

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Date: 6/27/2018 8:13:00 PM
Mansi, congratulations on your win. Nicely done and very beautiful . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Mansi Sharma
Date: 6/29/2018 6:49:00 AM
Thank u so much!:)
Date: 6/25/2018 11:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this lovely poem in 7 lines. Well done!
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Mansi Sharma
Date: 6/26/2018 1:50:00 PM
Thanks a lot, :)
Date: 6/25/2018 4:24:00 PM
Dear Mansi, congratulations on your top win - so well-deserved! I enjoyed reading this lovely witty piece! Bravo. Pandita
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Mansi Sharma
Date: 6/26/2018 1:48:00 PM
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 6/25/2018 3:09:00 PM
Mansi, I love the last line, congrats on your win. John
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Mansi Sharma
Date: 6/26/2018 1:48:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 6/25/2018 6:51:00 AM
Wouldn't that be lovely.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Mansi Sharma
Date: 6/25/2018 2:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for liking it!:)
Date: 6/22/2018 6:31:00 AM
Mansi.. I enjoyed reading your romantic poem this morning. I especially liked your wonderful title!
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Mansi Sharma
Date: 6/23/2018 6:20:00 AM
Thank you so much!:)

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