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forever dusk


worry encompassed my mind
             and the  c a r e l e s s  nature of its 
dread tried to erase my sight-
     I am forever dusk at dawn…
                              seeing sights I wish were unseen.



August 23, 2019
Writing Challenge 3, August 2019- Five Lines- Poetry Contest
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Date: 8/31/2019 9:52:00 PM
Lu, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this amazing Verse ~
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Date: 8/29/2019 7:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Luloo, I suppose we all see sights we wish were unseen from time to time, I just close my eyes and imagine I'm in a better place. Hugs, John
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Date: 8/29/2019 12:58:00 PM
very true, I agree :) thank you dear John! :)-luloo
Date: 8/29/2019 3:27:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, L.L. .... a writing that should have been placed on top of the winners list ... excellent :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/29/2019 12:58:00 PM
awww thank you so much sweet SS :)-luloo
Date: 8/29/2019 12:46:00 AM
Great win, Lu. Congratulations. Last line is a gem.
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Date: 8/29/2019 12:57:00 PM
thank you sweet Subimal :)-luloo
Date: 8/28/2019 7:25:00 PM
A haunting poem. congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/29/2019 12:57:00 PM
thank you lovely Jeanne :)-luloo
Date: 8/25/2019 7:06:00 AM
In five lines you have conquered the contest.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/29/2019 12:57:00 PM
many thanks sweet Caren :)-luloo
Date: 8/23/2019 3:46:00 PM
Wow, I really liked this, the style and the theme. This was fantastic. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 8/29/2019 12:57:00 PM
sorry for delay reply! thank you dear Chris :)-luloo