Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Forever Dusk

worry encompassed my mind
             and the  c a r e l e s s  nature of its 
dread tried to erase my sight-
     I am forever dusk at dawn…
                              seeing sights I wish were unseen.



August 23, 2019
Writing Challenge 3, August 2019- Five Lines- Poetry Contest
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Constance La France August 31, 2019 at 9:52 PM Lu, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this amazing Verse ~

John Gondolf August 29, 2019 at 7:26 AM Congrats on your win, Luloo, I suppose we all see sights we wish were unseen from time to time, I just close my eyes and imagine I'm in a better place. Hugs, John Beautiful Scars August 29, 2019 at 12:58 PM very true, I agree :) thank you dear John! :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2019 at 3:27 AM - Congratulations on your win, L.L. .... a writing that should have been placed on top of the winners list ... excellent :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Beautiful Scars August 29, 2019 at 12:58 PM awww thank you so much sweet SS :)-luloo

Subimal Sinha-Roy August 29, 2019 at 12:46 AM Great win, Lu. Congratulations. Last line is a gem. Beautiful Scars August 29, 2019 at 12:57 PM thank you sweet Subimal :)-luloo

Jeanne Mcgee August 28, 2019 at 7:25 PM A haunting poem. congrats on your win. Beautiful Scars August 29, 2019 at 12:57 PM thank you lovely Jeanne :)-luloo

Caren Krutsinger August 25, 2019 at 7:06 AM In five lines you have conquered the contest. Beautiful Scars August 29, 2019 at 12:57 PM many thanks sweet Caren :)-luloo

Chris Green August 23, 2019 at 3:46 PM Wow, I really liked this, the style and the theme. This was fantastic. Best wishes in the contest Beautiful Scars August 29, 2019 at 12:57 PM sorry for delay reply! thank you dear Chris :)-luloo