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Forever Dusk

worry encompassed my mind and the c a r e l e s s nature of its dread tried to erase my sight- I am forever dusk at dawn… seeing sights I wish were unseen. August 23, 2019 Writing Challenge 3, August 2019- Five Lines- Poetry Contest Sponsor, Dear Heart

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Constance La France
Date: 8/31/2019 9:52:00 PM
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Lu, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this amazing Verse ~
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/29/2019 7:26:00 AM
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Congrats on your win, Luloo, I suppose we all see sights we wish were unseen from time to time, I just close my eyes and imagine I'm in a better place. Hugs, John
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/29/2019 12:58:00 PM
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very true, I agree :) thank you dear John! :)-luloo
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2019 3:27:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your win, L.L. .... a writing that should have been placed on top of the winners list ... excellent :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/29/2019 12:58:00 PM
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awww thank you so much sweet SS :)-luloo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/29/2019 12:46:00 AM
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Great win, Lu. Congratulations. Last line is a gem.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/29/2019 12:57:00 PM
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thank you sweet Subimal :)-luloo
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/28/2019 7:25:00 PM
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A haunting poem. congrats on your win.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/29/2019 12:57:00 PM
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thank you lovely Jeanne :)-luloo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/25/2019 7:06:00 AM
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In five lines you have conquered the contest.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/29/2019 12:57:00 PM
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many thanks sweet Caren :)-luloo
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Chris Green
Date: 8/23/2019 3:46:00 PM
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Wow, I really liked this, the style and the theme. This was fantastic. Best wishes in the contest
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/29/2019 12:57:00 PM
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sorry for delay reply! thank you dear Chris :)-luloo

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