Forever Bright

sift through sands of time
one grain sparkles forever
your light fills our hearts
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Tribute to our friend, Amy T.
Wonderful co-worker who is transferring
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Itticheria Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 9:01 PM
Gorgeous tribute to your friend Jim!you expressed as much as possible with as little as possible. Very profound and beautiful.Gd Bless! Chacko.
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January 5, 2010 at 3:23 AM
She sounds like a great person, the middle line is excellent...Raul
Guzzi Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 7:53 PM
a sweet tribute from a sweet man! Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 5:42 AM
Beautifully written. Hope that you shared with her. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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December 24, 2009 at 3:38 PM
Beautiful, Jim! A real nice tribute to your coworker and very thoughtful. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your excellent review of my poem, "Clouds on Fire". Best wishes to you and yours for a merry Christmas and a great new year 2010! Your friend in poetry, Caroline.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 24, 2009 at 11:33 AM
This is a very nice tribute to your co-worker. I know that she must have been very happy to read it. Beautiful, Jimbo.
Pickett Avatar
December 24, 2009 at 4:34 AM
An uplifting early morning read here James, I enjoyed it with my cup of coffee...Thanks for commenting on my work...God Bless...Taz
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December 20, 2009 at 5:02 AM
Dear James, this is going on my favorite list. Simply beautifu! Wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas and all the best in the New Year, Love, Lainie
Lokken Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 11:20 AM
This is a very sweet dedication.:) Best wishes, Sara
Austin Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 8:42 AM
This fine piece can be applied at least two ways. Love, daver
Shango Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 7:51 AM
A very tribute, Jimmy, my boy ... a very nice write indeed. Thoughtful as always, a genius of love flows from heart and through your pen ... and I pray from us, back to you again. One love
Devonshire Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 6:17 PM
A lovely tribute to someone you will surely miss. Hope that light continues to fill your heart forever, Jimbo! Much love and Christmas blessings, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
December 13, 2009 at 6:50 PM
A grand tribute. I am sure she loved it, Good job james. Sincerely, Moses
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December 13, 2009 at 8:43 AM
and your light Jimbo fills us here at the Soup with your great poetry.. enjoyed your blog comment to Brian today... I just wrote Childlike as inspiration from his blog and all the comments posted... such a great communication method for us all to share... may your light always shine for u and your family and their light does for u Jimbo.. blessings... luv... happy Sunday.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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December 13, 2009 at 8:22 AM
Wonderful tribute ,trust she like it Jim.Rgds Brian
Strand Avatar
December 13, 2009 at 8:21 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Jim.Rgds Brian
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December 11, 2009 at 3:45 PM
What a lovely poem, to someone, whom I'm sure has made a difference in many lives. Best wishes, and good luck to her! ~ Nice dedication, James! ~ love, Carrie
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