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Forever Bright

sift through sands of time
one grain sparkles forever
your light fills our hearts
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Tribute to our friend, Amy T.
Wonderful co-worker who is transferring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/26/2010 9:01:00 PM
Gorgeous tribute to your friend Jim!you expressed as much as possible with as little as possible. Very profound and beautiful.Gd Bless! Chacko.
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Date: 1/5/2010 3:23:00 AM
She sounds like a great person, the middle line is excellent...Raul
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Date: 12/25/2009 7:53:00 PM
a sweet tribute from a sweet man! Light & Love
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Date: 12/25/2009 5:42:00 AM
Beautifully written. Hope that you shared with her. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/24/2009 3:38:00 PM
Beautiful, Jim! A real nice tribute to your coworker and very thoughtful. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your excellent review of my poem, "Clouds on Fire". Best wishes to you and yours for a merry Christmas and a great new year 2010! Your friend in poetry, Caroline.
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Date: 12/24/2009 11:33:00 AM
This is a very nice tribute to your co-worker. I know that she must have been very happy to read it. Beautiful, Jimbo.
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Date: 12/24/2009 4:34:00 AM
An uplifting early morning read here James, I enjoyed it with my cup of coffee...Thanks for commenting on my work...God Bless...Taz
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Date: 12/20/2009 5:02:00 AM
Dear James, this is going on my favorite list. Simply beautifu! Wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas and all the best in the New Year, Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/19/2009 11:20:00 AM
This is a very sweet dedication.:) Best wishes, Sara
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Date: 12/19/2009 8:42:00 AM
This fine piece can be applied at least two ways. Love, daver
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Date: 12/17/2009 7:51:00 AM
A very tribute, Jimmy, my boy ... a very nice write indeed. Thoughtful as always, a genius of love flows from heart and through your pen ... and I pray from us, back to you again. One love
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Date: 12/15/2009 6:17:00 PM
A lovely tribute to someone you will surely miss. Hope that light continues to fill your heart forever, Jimbo! Much love and Christmas blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 12/13/2009 6:50:00 PM
A grand tribute. I am sure she loved it, Good job james. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 12/13/2009 8:43:00 AM
and your light Jimbo fills us here at the Soup with your great poetry.. enjoyed your blog comment to Brian today... I just wrote Childlike as inspiration from his blog and all the comments posted... such a great communication method for us all to share... may your light always shine for u and your family and their light does for u Jimbo.. blessings... luv... happy Sunday.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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Date: 12/13/2009 8:22:00 AM
Wonderful tribute ,trust she like it Jim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/13/2009 8:21:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Jim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/11/2009 3:45:00 PM
What a lovely poem, to someone, whom I'm sure has made a difference in many lives. Best wishes, and good luck to her! ~ Nice dedication, James! ~ love, Carrie
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