Forever and Forever

The beginning is the best rhyming 
Holding hands, never parting
Talking of the future, always smilling 
Making sound of music, always humming 
Those picnic park days, always vacationing 
Forever and Forever, to the honeymoon

Then the second stanza, no more laughter 
Time moves slowly, it staggers
There are more hiccups, the pain only leaves tatters
Goodbyes take over, what happened to lets get together?
And the hangover of the day after, only shatters
Forever and Forever, dying faster

Then comes the 3rd stanza, issues still floating 
It's like the third year of marriage, voices are roaring
Questions come down like torrential rains,....falling
A state of confusion, only worsening 
The future becomes a target, a lot of regretting 
Forever and Forever, how do you find yourself in this setting? 
Forever and Forever, no more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/12/2015 6:57:00 PM
Njeri, Njeri, Njeri, I detect so much sorrow and sadness and frustration> You have concentrated it into so few words that it leaps out and grabs you and startles you. May God grant you help and always be with you. Jim Horn
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/13/2015 8:24:00 PM
I feel so naked:(. But am glad I can talk about it. And am very thankful to have a family here like you Jim. This means a lot to me. Be blessed
Date: 3/12/2015 5:57:00 PM
Take the time to listen and cherish one another. Your forever is within reach...C--->A
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/13/2015 8:14:00 PM
Thank you so much cupids arrow. I will always cherish your words.
Date: 3/12/2015 10:33:00 AM
I am here to tell you forever and ever is possible. For those who make there way through the rain there is much to celebrate. At the time we may be unaware but the rain is what helps us grow. Then when the sun comes we will not wither under the heat.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/13/2015 8:11:00 PM
Oh Rick, I don't know what to say or how to say it. But thank you for your support and wise words. God bless.
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