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Forever and a Day

When I first saw you Like the moon newly born The aura exuded by you Melted my heart of stone I felt no longer same As a new peace upon me came. When I first spoke to you Like a sinner to an angel I felt being washed anew Like a soul saved from hell I felt no longer same As upon me a new peace came. When I first heard your voice Like angels singing God's praise When I first heard you talk I felt relieved of a bulk I was trapped by your charm Feeling cool all thesame. When you first touched me I got lost in pleasure's sea When you first held my hands My nerves stood on ends I was trapped by your charm Feeling cool all thesame. When you first stared me in the eyes I felt my heartbeat rise When you eyes locked with mine And a tingling sweet sensation up my spine For making me feel this way I'll love you forever and a day. When our lips first met I was buoyed with a renewed zest An electrifying desire To daily hope for the better For making me feel this way I’ll love you forever and a day. PS: Placed 3rd in Frank H's Compliment Contest.

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Date: 10/10/2013 6:43:00 AM
Congrats for the win in the contest, Alozor
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Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 10/12/2013 5:44:00 AM
Thank you Dr.
Date: 10/9/2013 10:46:00 AM
Alozor. Congratulations on your deserved winning poem. Perfectly complimented by your pen. Have a nice day. xox~ LINDA
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Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 10/12/2013 5:43:00 AM
Thanks a lot Linda.
Date: 10/8/2013 7:10:00 AM
A very nice love story....congratulations on your win...
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Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 10/8/2013 7:41:00 AM
Thanks Donna
Date: 10/7/2013 12:54:00 PM
congrats Alozor well done ...Seren
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Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 10/7/2013 2:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Seren.

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