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Forever All the Time

I hear your trembling voice and see your tear stained face my heart feels these things because my pain can't be erased one day he was here, happy as could be then like a fading rainbow he was taken from me the emptiness in my heart that only he could fill nothing makes it go away I keep repeating, "this can't be real" a mothers love is special different from other kinds loving all her children forever, all the time when one is taken nothing is the same everything is different my heart calls his name

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/30/2014 4:04:00 PM
I can feel the strength of your emotions in this write Chris, I thank you for your comment on my poem about Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/27/2014 1:24:00 PM
This is very similar to one of your other poems titled "Daniel". This is another impressive write.
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:22:00 AM
- So true "when one is taken nothing is the same" - moving and well written, Chris. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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