Forever

F antastical daydream, from that moment on, made real
O therworldly, God-sent, lover, full of fervent zeal.
R ipe masculinity, dripping with desire,
E yes smoldering with charasmatic Fire.
V aliant, Demi-God, modern-day Prince Charming, 
E ffervescent boy-ish smile, disarming.
R uminating romantic, hopeless devotion, head over heels
I rreplaceable, irresistible, toe-curling squeals.
N atural-born, artful lover, kisses of wine 
Y outhful exuberance, male specimen, so fine.
O pen-hearted, unguarded, child-like, heart is true 
U nbridled passion ensues 
R acing heart, bated breath, tingling anticipations
E nvelops my soul beyond expectations 
Y oung love turns to slow, deep embers still burning 
E mbraces with still hungry arms still leave me yearning 
S ouls entwined, keeps love's hope burning.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Rycroft Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 5:01 AM
Congrats on this lovely poem x
Wigley Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 10:41 PM
Fiery, passionate stuff,Michelle. Congrats! Viv x
A  Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Michelle,congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
Morningstar Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:27 PM
thanks! I love reading yours as well. The Goodbye was so visceral.
Y. Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Hi Michelle, Congratulations on your 3 rd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Morningstar Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:27 PM
thanks!
Rycroft Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:44 AM
Brilliant romantic poem x
Morningstar Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Thank you. My husband was my inspiration and I think I saw him blush! :)
Smith Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 6:06 PM
Wow and I thought I was good. Glad I dropped by. Found another poet keeping romance alive. There is hope yet still for generations to come. Your poetry is divine. Will look in another time to see what other places your poetry can take me to. Best regards David from NZ.
Morningstar Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:30 PM
Thank you. We just renewed our vows in April and after 16 years he still makes my heart flutter. Here's to love...forever!
Allison Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 5:51 PM
love acrostic for the contest Michelle:-) hugs Jan xx
Morningstar Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:31 PM
thanks!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace