Forever

I had forever
   then unexpectedly
   the clock stopped.
The ticking had slowed
   when I wasn't paying attention
   and the tocks between were longer than before.
Breath waned after a miss, a slip and faltering
  and heartbeat, once loud and pounding with strength
  ceased - still and silent
and forever was gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 2:26 PM
- Lovely and touching, DM - hugs // Sun :)
Rycroft Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 11:09 AM
A great poem well written x
May Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Life is but a season gone....nicely penned DM.... A7
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