Forever

Forever

Fighting again – what a shock
Our love seems to somehow be blocked
Really, let’s fix this mess
End bad feelings, distress
Value anew
Every trial we’ve been through 
Remember how much I love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 10:09 AM
NiCely done poem, Heather, congrats on the win
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on your win Heather.
Buxton Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 2:08 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words on your kind words :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 4:08 PM
Fixing the relationship is part of keeping it alive. Well said. Congrats for your win.
Buxton Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 2:35 AM
Thank you for your kind words Andrea :)
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 11:11 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Heather :-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 2:16 PM
forever love - lovely sentiment despite all the ups and downs its worth fighting for - keep on talking and loving:-) Hugs jan xx
Buxton Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 2:36 AM
And you too Jan, thanks for the interest and the kind words :) xx
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 4:54 AM
Nice acrostic! Relationships always need lots of care and maintenance just like anything else in life and more in order to preserve it or keep it alive. Communication is so important at all times. Best to you heather! xxxx D.
Buxton Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 2:38 AM
That is so sweet of you to say, thank you :) xx
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