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this could be the love that lasts forever or it could be the one that ends tonight at this moment as your eyes look directly at me i feel such tender feelings for you as you take me in your arms and lean so close to me i can not help but think you are the one for me but you don't say much of anything at all tonight i feel your heart is mine forever but when tomorrow comes i'll go back to wondering if this is love to you or just a fling

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Date: 11/13/2013 11:39:00 AM
Very nicely written!
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Date: 9/3/2013 10:03:00 AM
I definitely understand the feelings & questions behind these lines. If one cannot give you that answer, become your own answer. Nicely done!
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Date: 9/2/2013 5:44:00 PM
Hi Faith, A lovely romantic write..I enjoyed this one.. Regards, Ken
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Date: 9/2/2013 4:58:00 PM
† I Love Your Avatar. Precious Little Poochie. Also, Your Painting Is Very Lovely And Let Us Forever Hope As Raise Our Chalice To This Toast Be It Love Within It's Rightful Season ˜ Love, John
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