Mustapha Mohammed Poet Rhyme

Forever

My dear love,gaze within your heart
And feel the love thats growing
Where the divine petals start
And the trembling flowers glowing.

Where dovelike stars in towering light
Bears the seeds of beauty
Upon the breastplate of your heart
Love has done its duty.

Feel the stems, the hidden root
Of loves soaring height
Ride the wind,the happy wind
That takes us out to flight.

My dear love,tread no more in sadness
Your mourning heart so deep
Take my hands and fly with me
To the brinks of heavens peak!

 FOREVER

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Poet Destroyer A November 26, 2013 at 11:46 PM Hello M&M, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

Wayne Hill September 16, 2013 at 7:47 AM the last stanza takes this poem to knew heights....well done.

Liam Mcdaid September 6, 2013 at 11:06 AM VERY BEAUTIFUL MY FRIEND I REALLY ENJOYED

Kelly Deschler September 1, 2013 at 4:54 PM Great poem, once again! I love the rhyme scheme that you used, it flows nicely within these lines. Superb poetry!

Liam Mcdaid August 29, 2013 at 2:48 AM LIKE A LIGHT WITH ITS ENERGY GLOWING BEAUTIFUL PIECE MY OLD PAL Mustapha Mohammed August 30, 2013 at 4:21 AM Thank you my friend. Its so nice to hear from you.

Andrea Dietrich August 27, 2013 at 2:24 PM a very beautiful poem, my friend. sixth line just say "bear" Luv, Andrea Mustapha Mohammed August 30, 2013 at 4:22 AM Thank you my friend. Its so nice to hear from you.

Shadow Hamilton August 20, 2013 at 7:47 PM any time any where dearest friend lol. M.M again you excel this is gorgeous love it such a lovely flow love Shadow xox smile Mustapha Mohammed August 30, 2013 at 4:27 AM lol thanks my friend. So nice to hear from you.

Ralph Mason August 19, 2013 at 9:25 AM lovely poem mustapha. warm thoughs, Ralph Mustapha Mohammed August 30, 2013 at 4:26 AM Thank you Ralph for your kind review on my poem.

Nette Onclaud August 18, 2013 at 7:38 AM tugging at the heratstrings, mus...i Iike the lilt of the emotions that carry such a depth of feeling...wonderful piece!..:) huggs! Mustapha Mohammed August 30, 2013 at 4:25 AM Thank you Nette for your lovely review. Its so nice to hear from you. Hugs

Sara Kendrick August 18, 2013 at 6:31 AM Ahhh!!! Passionate and romantic work that touches another's inner being..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work..It was good to read the comment very uplifting..Sara Mustapha Mohammed August 30, 2013 at 4:20 AM Thank you Sara for your lovely review. Its so nice to hear from you.

Richard Lamoureux August 18, 2013 at 2:27 AM This is a beautiful and romantic piece. Very moving,. For me forever ended to quickly. Mustapha Mohammed August 19, 2013 at 8:25 AM Hi Richie,you're absolutely correct. It ended to quickly. In the future I will add the length of this piece.

Arthur Vaso August 17, 2013 at 11:36 PM a very romantic poem!!! Mustapha Mohammed August 19, 2013 at 8:23 AM Thank you Arthur for your kind review on my poem.

Seren Roberts August 17, 2013 at 9:10 PM Its 4am here, even at this unsightly hour your poem reads magnificently .....Seren Mustapha Mohammed August 19, 2013 at 8:22 AM Thank you very much Seren for your kind review. How are you doing?