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Forever

Forever A child's forever Limited by experience Restrung like pearls... Hoping my- forever Ends with my quiet breath And dies in the wind.... Cruel beyond measure To find that infinite place Still longing for you... I cannot love you forever...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/1/2010 10:21:00 AM
i like the intensity, suttle, building. thank you, chuck
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Date: 6/1/2010 12:01:00 AM
I like the center alignment, it set the mood for the poem.... Excellent my friend....:JP]
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Date: 5/31/2010 11:52:00 PM
Wow, amazing debpth. Very sad , full of so much emotion. Wonderful poem, you truly write from the heart. Ashley
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Date: 5/31/2010 11:12:00 PM
This says a lot. Good write....Karla
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