Forever

Forever A child's forever Limited by experience Restrung like pearls... Hoping my- forever Ends with my quiet breath And dies in the wind.... Cruel beyond measure To find that infinite place Still longing for you... I cannot love you forever...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Keys Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 10:21 AM
i like the intensity, suttle, building. thank you, chuck
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June 1, 2010 at 12:01 AM
I like the center alignment, it set the mood for the poem.... Excellent my friend....:JP]
Yates Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 11:52 PM
Wow, amazing debpth. Very sad , full of so much emotion. Wonderful poem, you truly write from the heart. Ashley
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May 31, 2010 at 11:12 PM
This says a lot. Good write....Karla
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