Forever


         I would like to stay here forever
   watching the mountains change color
             free as the hawk soaring by
                   listening to the brook
                       gurgle in motion
                    with passing clouds
                            comforting
                                freeing
                                 peace

Heidi Sands

9/29/26

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Gershon Wolf

September 28, 2026 at 8:40 PM

Perhaps -- knowing you can't stay forever AND that the scene will change too makes it all the more precious. Nicely written. :) gw

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 28, 2026 at 2:45 PM

Hello Heidi, your poem sounds to me to be peaceful. I would not want to leave there either. Hugs. /Darlene/

Mike Bayles

September 28, 2026 at 2:30 PM

Such a nice use of form, Heidi. Beautiful poem.

Paula Goldsmith

September 28, 2026 at 2:04 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Forever" write. I can feel the peace in your words. Wish I was there seeing it in person. Hugs... Have a fun day writing away.............

Heidi Sands

September 28, 2026 at 2:11 PM

Thank you Paula. It would be nice for you to visit here some day. It is beautiful and would be fun . Hugs :)

Hiya Sharma

September 28, 2026 at 10:48 AM

Awwn how liberating that would be! So refreshing and fulfilling for the soul! Such a beautiful nonet! I love nonets ~ and this one you've just written so impeccably! Seeing the skys and the mountains change colour , how whimsical 💫🌙 pleasure reading your words always! Adore this! sending you poetic light and fairy hugsz 💕🫶🏻🦄

Heidi Sands

September 28, 2026 at 1:44 PM

Thank you very much! Yes very liberating. I appreciate your kind comment :)