Forever

A silk gown long and white The veil covered her face Heeled shoes of pearls and lace Hands gripped the flowers tight She’d falter not this night She walked with poise and grace A black suit stained with tears Her fingers through his hair She touched his skin with care Was approached by her peers Confirming her worst fears Her heart could feel him there In death as was in life They were husband and wife 03/12/2021 Written for HexSonnetta Poetry Contest Sponsor Emilie Pinet

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/5/2021 10:02:00 PM

Poignant! Congrats on your win with this beautiful work!

Evelyn Swartz
Date: 4/6/2021 2:22:00 AM

Thank you

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2021 5:06:00 AM

oh so sad a scenario, beautifully penned many congrats Evelyn:-) hugs jan xx

Evelyn Swartz
Date: 4/6/2021 2:23:00 AM

Jan, thank you for the comment. It means so much to me when a seasoned poet such as yourself reads my work.

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/4/2021 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations Evelyn! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, you should be proud of your placing, this was a challenging form, but your poem stood out, well done my friend, Emile.

Evelyn Swartz
Date: 4/4/2021 8:17:00 PM

Thank you so much. I am truly honored to have placed in the contest. I am happy that my poem stood out. It means a lot when a seasoned poet such as yourself notices my work. Poetry Soup has taught me so much. I love learning new forms.