Foretold

Ingratitude for Mother Nature's gifts
and our desire to live with greatest ease
have caused strange outcomes; now our planet shifts
climatically by frightening degrees.

With dwindling faith, I've watched as humankind
continues recklessly upon Time's path,
careening or half-stumbling as if blind
to what's to come when we receive Earth's wrath.

We're led by fools and thieves who do not lead
with vision. All around, inequity
abounds as love is killed by war and greed.
This planet's final hours I think I see. . . 

Our fate's foretold. An unforgiving earth
by burning will be purged for its rebirth.


“Please Try to Go Beyond Earth Hour” 
Here is my tip in poetry form:

When out and about, take the shortest route.
Run your errands all on the same day.
A tip - move those hips! Cut down on your trips
in your car, and save gas that way!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Watt Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 11:29 AM
"We're led by fools and thieves who do not lead / with vision. All around, inequity" - these words are even more true today. Love your tip about reducing car trips and moving our hips more!
Kendrick Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 2:46 PM
Great tips..Good job..Congrats on your win..Sara
Prabhu Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 9:18 AM
congrats on the contest placement Andrea!!!
Brown Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nikko's "Beyond Earth" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations on your Earth Hour win Andy this is wonderful and yes get those hips swinging everyone, oh those were the days, xx
K. Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 5:08 AM
I just knew this wonderful sonnet was yours, sweetie! Shucks, I missed reading this from before, apparently? I really like how this had some sense of foreboding to it-- we definitely should start acting! and I also loved how you wrote a poem for your tip! Very cool :D Congrats and thank you for entering this challenge, sweetie pie! hugs to you!
Williams Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 3:23 AM
Andrea congrats on another great win..David
Sweetheart Avatar
November 28, 2010 at 8:59 PM
OK I changed my second line ..one word.. and changed my last line ..one word.. from shadows to mystique'... do u like essence rather than mystique'? let me know on an old poem of mine... thankxxx..
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October 15, 2010 at 5:36 PM
That is a powerful piece, Andrea! Very emotional, excellent job. Thanks for the comment on 3:00pm Departure I love the sight of geese flying in formation! Caught sight of these two formations while on the bus...a glance at my watch just as we were leaving, 3:00 pm... knew I had the title! My only regret, I didn't get to hear them honking:)
Babcock Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:22 PM
An excellent write on the planet's struggle to regain balance. Phyl
Eggins Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 10:18 PM
Andrea a brilliant poem on the planets continuous struggle ... brava ... love Jayne
Davis Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 4:42 PM
Amen!
Knop Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 3:39 PM
So well penned, Andrea and so true! We have to blame firstly all politicians who are not able to withstand the pressure of shameless industries! Thank you for posting this Sonnett! Thank you also for your friendly comments. Yo've asked my if my poem Babij Yar was a translation of Jevtushenko's original poem. No, it is not. I wrote my poem Babij Yar when I remembered Jevtushenko's and the gruel incidents at that place. Have a great Sunday! Love, Gert
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 7:45 PM
Eventually the Earth will fight back for the things we did to it. Another excellent poem
Austin Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 11:39 AM
Grim Reaper stuff. I can't help but agree - something's gotta give. Our values are upside down and rebellion by the young seems evident. ANGER! Love, Dave
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September 29, 2010 at 9:39 PM
Very nicely conveyed message, Andrea. I've been concerned about this for a long time. If this is for the 2012 contest, I wish you success! Love, Carolyn
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September 29, 2010 at 5:00 AM
Drea, you love nature and if we can all be like you it will be good out there. it is only that as people we want to satisfy ourselfs and then we tend to forget that nature needs to be preserved, actualy there can not be life without nature..........
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 12:53 PM
Soup mail on my contest....
Keys Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 12:23 PM
amen. grade A+ work. great message. unfortunately most people are deaf, dumb and or just dont care - but we do, one step at a time, we make the difference. thank you, chuck
Murphy Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 10:26 AM
very very nice and thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poetry appreciate it alot thanks for all you support and ever so kind comments faleshia
Murphy Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 10:25 AM
very very nice and thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poetry appreciate it alot thanks for all you support and ever so kind comments faleshia
Brown Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 10:22 AM
Outstanding Andrea. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 7:03 AM
Andrea, what a gem on the destruction cause by our ignorance.. Once again you sublime write, love Wilma
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September 28, 2010 at 5:49 AM
Beautiful Sonnet, and a very important message shared Andrea...love Michael
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 3:57 AM
Very powerful thoughts on how we exploit Nature's gifts to our advantage, Andrea. enjoyed the sonnet
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