Forest Trail

I am the forest trail
steep and dangerous
expansive and free
my rocks could be your bearings
or they could give away under your feet
I can offer water and refuge
or a maze tight as a wreath
colours from sky to soil
air organic and wild
you might question the way you used to breathe
climb great heights
trip on roots wrought deep
find views not to be forgotten
tame the animals you meet
life here perseveres
even when it is delicate and thin
and many trample on the trail
to explore what's within
but the guides warn
do not disturb the earth
for once you pluck what's living
there's only diminishing returns
now the streams are hissing
moon and stars are reminiscing
you took only a leaf
but I can feel 
suddenly
it is missing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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artlyy Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 8:20 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 6:17 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Watt Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 4:17 PM
I love forest trails and I loved this poem. A fave ~ John
Mccall Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 10:54 AM
You grabbed me with the first line and held onto me until the end.Thank you for the wonderful journey on this beautiful forest trail.
Oloye Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 2:13 AM
Every line thrills me Feel I could take it up from where it stopped
Lamoureux Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 6:30 PM
Metaphorical magic!
Cochrane Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 1:55 PM
Thank you Richard!
Green Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 2:31 PM
I loved this Krystal, it was as if I was on a journey through your words and as I took in the beauty I also learned not to disturb it, or else. Really nicely done.
Cochrane Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 9:17 PM
Thank you. I really enjoy your thoughtful comments on mine and other people's poetry.
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