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Forest Storm

bitter snow blizzard winter winds whisper warnings ~ snowshoe hare forages ( this poem on PS syllable counter is 17 syllables and 18 on howmanysyllables.com. I posted it as is due to the imagery that it captures. Just a disclaimer since this has been brought to my attention.)

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Joseph May

Date: 8/24/2022 2:12:00 AM

Very nice haiku Tania, soup mail

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/24/2022 5:14:00 AM

Joe, thank you!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 1/23/2022 3:11:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Tania . It paints a vivid picture ! I like winter winds whisper warnings . Thanks for your visit and comment on my poem . Susan :)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/23/2022 6:44:00 PM

Thank you Susan!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/20/2022 5:40:00 AM

An excellent haiku, Tania:) thank you for my placement in your winter haiku contest:)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/20/2022 3:58:00 PM

Thank you and you're welcome!

Charles Messina

Date: 1/18/2022 4:08:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, Tania. Great example for your contest. Will try.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/18/2022 2:37:00 PM

Thank you Charlie!

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/17/2022 6:51:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this, making me virtually experience winter in my "winterless" country. God bless you.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/18/2022 3:50:00 AM

Thank you Beata, no winter sounds like heaven to me!

John Watt

Date: 1/12/2022 9:59:00 AM

Tania, I love your imagery and the alliteration of line 2. Going now to put on a sweater... beautiful haiku writing, as per usual. Enjoy your day ~ John

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/12/2022 6:36:00 PM

Thank you John, appreciate your kind comments and visit!