Forest Storm

bitter snow blizzard
winter winds whisper warnings ~
snowshoe hare forages

( this poem on PS syllable counter is 17 syllables and 18 on howmanysyllables.com. I posted it as is due to the imagery that it captures. Just a disclaimer since this has been brought to my attention.)
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May Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 2:12 AM
Very nice haiku Tania, soup mail
Kitchin Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 5:14 AM
Joe, thank you!
Lawrence Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 3:11 PM
Beautiful imagery Tania . It paints a vivid picture ! I like winter winds whisper warnings . Thanks for your visit and comment on my poem . Susan :)
Kitchin Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 6:44 PM
Thank you Susan!
Daniel Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 5:40 AM
An excellent haiku, Tania:) thank you for my placement in your winter haiku contest:)
Kitchin Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 3:58 PM
Thank you and you're welcome!
Messina Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 4:08 AM
Beautiful haiku, Tania. Great example for your contest. Will try.
Kitchin Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 2:37 PM
Thank you Charlie!
Agustin Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 6:51 PM
Thanks for sharing this, making me virtually experience winter in my "winterless" country. God bless you.
Kitchin Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 3:50 AM
Thank you Beata, no winter sounds like heaven to me!
Watt Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Tania, I love your imagery and the alliteration of line 2. Going now to put on a sweater... beautiful haiku writing, as per usual. Enjoy your day ~ John
Kitchin Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 6:36 PM
Thank you John, appreciate your kind comments and visit!
Cunningham Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 8:24 AM
You paint a vivid winter scene with your words Tania. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 6:36 PM
Thank you Tom!
Lane Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 6:36 AM
Hi Tania. I can easily visualize the winter scene.
Kitchin Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 6:36 PM
Thank you Lin.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 4:20 AM
Ah, Tania you make me feel more cold. Lovely write. Hugs.
Kitchin Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 6:37 PM
Victor, I dislike winter but do appreciate the beauty it brings, thanks for your visit, hugs!
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 4:11 AM
- A clear and distinct text, Tania ... described the storm excellent :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 6:37 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! hugs
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