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Forest Songs

Melody of leaves, Hanging branches sing aloud: Harmony of trees.

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Marcus Crane

Date: 9/22/2009 3:46:00 PM

raul my friend .. thanks for sharing this wonderfull haiku , feel the serenity of this piece :) i can hear the leaves and create an image when i close my eyes. Marco

Ismael Nieves

Date: 9/17/2009 9:03:00 AM

I can hear the orchestra, Raul. I.N.

James Peranteau

Date: 9/17/2009 2:42:00 AM

Raul,...how fantastic this Haiku is my friend ! I always love the sounds nature makes,..it seems there is not a sound in nature which one could not enjoy. TY for this great poemyou have shared ! james

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/16/2009 8:54:00 PM

with the aid of a breeze this music is recorded, great job RM!

John Weber

Date: 9/16/2009 11:47:00 AM

Fun use of sound and visual within the structure of a Haiku, Raul! The mind can clearly hear the chatter and creaking of the season changing here. Warm regards, John.

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/16/2009 8:48:00 AM

Your pen flows with an eye that makes me think you should also hold a brush on canvas. ~ Another wonderful gift! ~

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/16/2009 6:52:00 AM

nicely done haiku

Lena Townsend

Date: 9/16/2009 6:28:00 AM

Yes, you captured my morning beautifully as this morning I sat on my patio beneath a beautiful tree of golden leaves. As they swirled to the ground with a peaceful rustling I was thinking to myself what a wonderful way to start the day. Thank you for your many kind comments and well wishes. YOU ROCK, just thought you should know. Smiles from Lolita

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/16/2009 5:07:00 AM

Good morning, Raul. Reading your poetry this morning has been a wonderful way to start the day. Thank you for sharing your image filled words. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann