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soft-eyed doe encircled in mist mesmerized I stop-stare you leap away-disappear my soul diminished

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Daisy Meadows

Date: 1/18/2025 6:10:00 AM

They are so beautiful. Lovely to see.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/1/2024 12:42:00 PM

this is so charming Suz, I've not seen a deer since we moved over here ! hugs jan xx

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/27/2024 12:16:00 PM

As a fan of deer, I find this poem to be a light on my heart. Deer eat trees and fiber rich weeds. They only fight when threatened. Thank you for this beautiful poem.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/28/2024 3:37:00 PM

Hi Hilda: Thanks for visiting and commenting on my poems. So happy it cheered you. SuZ

Paul Callus

Date: 8/21/2024 1:17:00 PM

This is an excellent Shadorma, Suz. I like the imagery and the impactful ending. ~ Best regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/23/2024 6:14:00 AM

Thanks Paul: I greatly appreciate your feedback, always. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2024 3:50:00 PM

Ahh it's so nice to see one of your poems

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/23/2024 6:13:00 AM

Always great to see you dear, friend. You have a beautiful heart. SuZ

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/19/2024 12:43:00 PM

What a lovely write for the cute doe. Great Picture. Enjoy your day with fun writing away.............

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/23/2024 6:12:00 AM

Thanks Paula ....for your lovely visit and comment. Most appreciated. SuZ

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2024 10:29:00 PM

Ahh!! I like to watch them when I see them in their natural settings like the diminishing forest's edge. In my yard, not so much but they only come in our yard at night though, so I don't see them just what they have destroyed. I don't see any of it much anymore because I am not able to get out there much. I enjoyed reading this one today. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/17/2024 2:17:00 PM

Great shadorma! Hugs

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/17/2024 2:25:00 PM

Thanks KIm: I appreciate your visit.