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Forest Sketch

soft-eyed doe
encircled in mist
mesmerized
I stop-stare
you leap away-disappear
my soul diminished

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Daisy Meadows

January 18, 2025 at 6:10 AM

They are so beautiful. Lovely to see.

Jan Allison

September 1, 2024 at 12:42 PM

this is so charming Suz, I've not seen a deer since we moved over here ! hugs jan xx

Hilda Greenhough

August 27, 2024 at 12:16 PM

As a fan of deer, I find this poem to be a light on my heart. Deer eat trees and fiber rich weeds. They only fight when threatened. Thank you for this beautiful poem.

Suzanne Delaney

August 28, 2024 at 3:37 PM

Hi Hilda: Thanks for visiting and commenting on my poems. So happy it cheered you. SuZ

Paul Callus

August 21, 2024 at 1:17 PM

This is an excellent Shadorma, Suz. I like the imagery and the impactful ending. ~ Best regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney

August 23, 2024 at 6:14 AM

Thanks Paul: I greatly appreciate your feedback, always. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

August 20, 2024 at 3:50 PM

Ahh it's so nice to see one of your poems

Suzanne Delaney

August 23, 2024 at 6:13 AM

Always great to see you dear, friend. You have a beautiful heart. SuZ

Paula Goldsmith

August 19, 2024 at 12:43 PM

What a lovely write for the cute doe. Great Picture. Enjoy your day with fun writing away.............

Suzanne Delaney

August 23, 2024 at 6:12 AM

Thanks Paula ....for your lovely visit and comment. Most appreciated. SuZ

Sara Kendrick

August 17, 2024 at 10:29 PM

Ahh!! I like to watch them when I see them in their natural settings like the diminishing forest's edge. In my yard, not so much but they only come in our yard at night though, so I don't see them just what they have destroyed. I don't see any of it much anymore because I am not able to get out there much. I enjoyed reading this one today. Sara K