Forest of Pines 02-08-25

To the clouds-
a tousled crown of green,
a bump in the fabric of land.

To the deer-
a hall of silent pillars,
woven shadows,
mighty temples.

To the rain-
a fleeting flash of green and brown

then hush-
splattering on fallen needles.
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August 2, 2025 at 6:35 AM
Excellent piece of descriptive poetry. Enjoyed! :) john
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