Carol Mitra Poet Haibun

Forest of Flame In Spring

The sun has torched you flaming red
A blooming of spring canopies spread
From a mile away I see red tree heads
Her red hot fringe teases the wind
She sways in tune marching lines ahead
And falls gently kissing this earthy bed
Street-long heavy-hung red pollen she spreads
Her fragrance follows this beauty in red

Passion awakens
With slow gentle rain kisses
Flaming red within.

15.3.2021

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Anisha Dutta March 21, 2021 at 11:51 AM Stating line is most alluring. All the best for contest. Love. Carol Mitra March 21, 2021 at 6:51 PM Thanks dear Anisha....much love :)

Caren Krutsinger March 21, 2021 at 12:50 AM I was going to point out my favorite lines, so I began to highlight them and discovered I had highlighted all of the lines so this went into my FAVEs. Carol Mitra March 21, 2021 at 3:38 AM Such a sweet gesture Caren....I am glad you liked it....much love and hugs :)