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Forest of Flame In Spring

The sun has torched you flaming red A blooming of spring canopies spread From a mile away I see red tree heads Her red hot fringe teases the wind She sways in tune marching lines ahead And falls gently kissing this earthy bed Street-long heavy-hung red pollen she spreads Her fragrance follows this beauty in red Passion awakens With slow gentle rain kisses Flaming red within. 15.3.2021

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Carol Louise Moon

Date: 3/29/2021 7:31:00 AM

Carol, what a beautiful poem. I love the imagery.

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/29/2021 8:45:00 AM

Thanks dear Carol....wow same names lovely.....much appreciated :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/21/2021 11:51:00 AM

Stating line is most alluring. All the best for contest. Love.

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/21/2021 6:51:00 PM

Thanks dear Anisha....much love :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/21/2021 12:50:00 AM

I was going to point out my favorite lines, so I began to highlight them and discovered I had highlighted all of the lines so this went into my FAVEs.

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/21/2021 3:38:00 AM

Such a sweet gesture Caren....I am glad you liked it....much love and hugs :)