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Forest In Fall

Reflections of shades, Glisten off the calm water; Luster of nature.

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Tyler Martin

Date: 4/27/2009 10:17:00 PM

The last lines grabs me in your haikus.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/22/2009 8:38:00 PM

Beautiful..i just love this short form because it draws you to the moment. You so good at this. BG

Date: 4/22/2009 12:49:00 PM

What a peaceful feeling poem. I like being by the water so I can really relate to this poem. Nice job! Thank you for your kind comment. Blessings to you. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2009 10:30:00 AM

Your poem takes me back in time to a hike through New Hampshire's White Mountains in early October. At a lakeside picnic, we stared in awe of the "Reflections of shades" that glistened off "the calm water." Wonderful memory inspired by your outstanding haiku, Raul! Love, Carolyn