Forest In Fall

Reflections of shades,
Glisten off the calm water;
Luster of nature.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Martin Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:17 PM
The last lines grabs me in your haikus.
Gorelick Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 8:38 PM
Beautiful..i just love this short form because it draws you to the moment. You so good at this. BG
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April 22, 2009 at 12:49 PM
What a peaceful feeling poem. I like being by the water so I can really relate to this poem. Nice job! Thank you for your kind comment. Blessings to you. Karen
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April 22, 2009 at 10:30 AM
Your poem takes me back in time to a hike through New Hampshire's White Mountains in early October. At a lakeside picnic, we stared in awe of the "Reflections of shades" that glistened off "the calm water." Wonderful memory inspired by your outstanding haiku, Raul! Love, Carolyn
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