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Forest

giant redwoods stand
                                   emerald branches rise up
                                     casting wooden spells





Written on 2/15/2017

Copyright © Laura Leiser | Year Posted 2017

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April 1, 2017 at 9:23 AM

I liked this at first sight, Laura! Pleased to see it on the winners' list...congratulations!! Regards // paul

April 1, 2017 at 11:45 AM

Thanks so much, Paul! :)

Richard Lamoureux

February 20, 2017 at 8:30 AM

This is perfect.

April 1, 2017 at 11:45 AM

Thanks, Richard :)

Constance La France

February 18, 2017 at 2:01 PM

Laura you have penned a nice image

February 18, 2017 at 2:07 PM

Thank you, Constance! I'm glad you like it. :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 18, 2017 at 12:55 AM

Beautiful image of the redwoods, Laura! I have never seen them but heard they are quite magical. Hugs, Rhonda:))

February 18, 2017 at 2:08 PM

Thanks, Rhonda! Redwoods are magical trees! I hope you can see them someday :)

Carolyn Devonshire

February 17, 2017 at 3:26 PM

Oh, Laura, when I visited the redwood forest, it did feel like an enchanted place where "wooden spells" might be cast by the trees. A lovely haiku!

February 17, 2017 at 3:44 PM

Thank you for commenting on my haiku, Carolyn! It is a magical place to be for me. :)

February 16, 2017 at 3:52 PM

Brilliant Haiku, a winning poem I think, Good luck Laura.

February 16, 2017 at 10:13 PM

Thanks, Roy. :)

February 16, 2017 at 2:08 PM

You offer a lovely image of redwoods, Laura....I might easily fall under their spell! Regards // paul

February 16, 2017 at 3:10 PM

Thank you, Paul! Glad you liked this one :)

February 16, 2017 at 11:17 AM

Beautiful work Laura, best wishes in the contest...

February 16, 2017 at 3:09 PM

Thank you, Charlie...and best wishes to you, as well :)

February 16, 2017 at 2:47 AM

Lovely haiku, Laura:) I wrote on the same topic, though I couldn't enter the contest..

February 16, 2017 at 3:09 PM

Thank you, Jo...were you too late to enter? Take care :)

February 16, 2017 at 12:31 AM

Saaweet vision of a Haiku...I luv it :)...peace, jill

February 16, 2017 at 12:36 AM

Thanks, Jill. :)

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