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Forest

Walking in the forest Very dark and gloomy Looking for own personal florist Meadows of flowers we will see One for you And one for me You pick blue I pick green We see the flower master Very big and broad It was a disaster He was very awed “Put back the flowers you have chosen” The florist is a cannibal The florist will be closin’ He treats us like animals Leave the florist this very instant Leaving now we must Found out the masters name is Winston We left him in the dust We went home empty handed Back to home we go We left the master stranded We take our time and go real slow We reach the house at last Dinner is ready We can’t remember our past Eating very steady Broccoli and mashed potatoes That’s our dinner meal It’s not very good though It’s better than a seal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/13/2010 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/12/2010 12:13:00 PM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer! Love , Adeleke
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Date: 6/9/2010 10:53:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/7/2010 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Steve. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2010 2:38:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme. Interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/12/2009 4:19:00 PM
Steve, nice work and welcome to poetry soup...Raul
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Date: 7/11/2009 10:50:00 PM
Hey! Great adventure to... You are such a promising poet, please keep writing...sharing your thoughts with us. Best wishes with your writings. Great you Steve ! Adeleke
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