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There are some questions that linger in seeming perpetual shadow, no matter how much we try and determine their answers. (Image by aaron)

Foreshadowing's Penumbra

Foreshadowing’s Penumbra
                                  by Odin Roark

In his darkened room,
The tick tock of scissors
Clipping flowers in waiting,
The voices chiming distant,
Even with his ear pressed tightly
Against the wall.

The florist and her customer
Prattle endlessly of grand kids
Of church sermons choked with tears
Black cars and dark veiled mourners.

Then…

Had they wandered off,
Further into the future,
Or merely hiding in the walls,
Crouched in darkly recess,
Deeper in his head.

“Patience, anxious one,”
Someone replies gleefully,
Her identity and origin
His nightly unresolved mystery.

Was he not ready?
Could time be stubbornly refusing him judgment,
Rendering instead another mistrial
As tomorrow’s sunrise breaks the darkness,
Setting up another day of foreshadowing’s penumbra.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 27, 2014 at 12:25 PM
I really do like this very strange poem of yours, Odin...excellent!! :) john.
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