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Forenoon Lullaby

forenoon lullaby —
sunlit zephyr cooing
o’er Summer oak leaves

7/31/2020

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Eve Roper

August 4, 2020 at 3:29 PM

lovely imagery , Kim, we have been having that cool morning breeze over my oak tree. I sit under it swinging my grandson on a web swing he loves.

Kim Rodrigues

August 5, 2020 at 3:31 AM

Love the image! :)

Panagiota Romios

August 4, 2020 at 7:22 AM

Really love this Pangie xx

Kim Rodrigues

August 5, 2020 at 3:31 AM

Thank you!

Alkas Poetry

August 3, 2020 at 5:30 AM

Pure poetry inspiration, salute alkas

Kim Rodrigues

August 3, 2020 at 1:37 PM

Thank you, Alkas!

Gershon Wolf

August 2, 2020 at 1:40 PM

Interesting: Is the zephyr come to awaken the leaves or to lull(aby) them to sleep? Nice haiku!! Wonder and Joy, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

August 2, 2020 at 6:23 PM

Love your question!

David Smith

August 1, 2020 at 4:19 AM

Never too old for a good lullabye, Kim. We need plenty of them where the jungle is all concrete, maybe it will take more than one sledgehammer for them to reach some hearts until poetry is more widely read. Glad you are still posting. David in NZ

Kim Rodrigues

August 2, 2020 at 5:30 AM

Many don’t want to explore their emotions. What a pity! Children need to be exposed to poetry. Love that we never grow too old for a good lullaby. Be blessed, David!