Sigrid Ermine Poet Sonnet

Foreign Hitherto

Pushing cascades crest bastion, stomach lost
    Largesse spread wafts orange blossom bridal
    Bestows clouds let go to marshmallow moss
    Fearless flight crinoline crash vertical


    In gospel gothic deep chasm, drunk mink swims
    Stirring fate, bleeding tea leaves bewilder
    Leather gil quiver, loaded to the brim
    Goddess mink Milda, silk coat cylinder


    Poison spore auburn myrrh lassoo arrows
    Immune audine preened, unwitting Otto
    Seduced by sadist, dart sought embargo
    Incapacitated poderoso


    Discharged firearm, struck futile, fratenised
    Love liege embalms gun powder, satisfied




            Ninth February 
              Hijacked by 
             Milda Audine

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Daniel Henry Rodgers February 15, 2024 at 5:56 AM Dear Sigrid, Your poem takes the reader through cascading emotions and landscapes with contrasting scenes and sensations. From the orange blossom bridal to the deep chasm of gospel gothic, each stanza evokes a distinct atmosphere and mood. How you explore themes of fearlessness, fate, seduction, and love in such a rich and intricate manner is genuinely captivating. Your use of imagery, such as the leather quiver and poison spore auburn myrrh, adds depth and complexity to the narrative. Overall, your poem is a testament to your skill as a poet and your ability to craft vivid and evocative imagery. - Blessings, Daniel