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Foreign Hitherto

Pushing cascades crest bastion, stomach lost Largesse spread wafts orange blossom bridal Bestows clouds let go to marshmallow moss Fearless flight crinoline crash vertical In gospel gothic deep chasm, drunk mink swims Stirring fate, bleeding tea leaves bewilder Leather gil quiver, loaded to the brim Goddess mink Milda, silk coat cylinder Poison spore auburn myrrh lassoo arrows Immune audine preened, unwitting Otto Seduced by sadist, dart sought embargo Incapacitated poderoso Discharged firearm, struck futile, fratenised Love liege embalms gun powder, satisfied Ninth February Hijacked by Milda Audine

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/15/2024 5:56:00 AM

Dear Sigrid, Your poem takes the reader through cascading emotions and landscapes with contrasting scenes and sensations. From the orange blossom bridal to the deep chasm of gospel gothic, each stanza evokes a distinct atmosphere and mood. How you explore themes of fearlessness, fate, seduction, and love in such a rich and intricate manner is genuinely captivating. Your use of imagery, such as the leather quiver and poison spore auburn myrrh, adds depth and complexity to the narrative. Overall, your poem is a testament to your skill as a poet and your ability to craft vivid and evocative imagery. - Blessings, Daniel