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Forecasting Hawks

Unhindered by birds or stars, hawks fly over the sky. In his fanciful glades, pursuing a fog growing heavier. A cloud, he realizes, will fall in an unfathomable spot. Thunder rumbles afar away, and my heart skips a beat. The mists are moving toward the stirring leaves. The mountains are also home to young and ibex. Nothing isolates us from the everlasting cloud. Where the water fills parched rural areas and hearts.
Written: July 20, 2021
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Skelly Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 11:03 PM
Beautiful images of utopia...Delice
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July 22, 2021 at 3:13 AM
Thank you so much Delice appreciate your nice comment
Hankins Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 8:28 AM
Beautiful images wrapped up in an "everlasting cloud." So nice, Lasaad.
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July 21, 2021 at 1:53 PM
Thank you so much Milton, your wonderful words are always uplifting to me, and so appreciated
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July 21, 2021 at 11:05 AM
Thank you so much Milton, your wonderful words are always uplifting to me, and so appreciated
Kannan Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 6:55 AM
Such a beautiful imagery... Thoroughly enjoyed reading it...
Poet Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 11:06 AM
Thanks my friend Supraja, appreciate your kindness and your sweet words
Pandit Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 5:01 AM
Wonderful images you depicted, Lasaad. Vibrant poem.
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July 21, 2021 at 6:42 AM
Thank you so much Vijay, your comment is so uplifting, have a wonderful day dear friend.
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July 21, 2021 at 6:19 AM
Thank you so much Vijay, your comment is so uplifting, have a wonderful day dear friend.
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July 20, 2021 at 11:21 PM
Delightful description of nature. Loved it.
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July 21, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Thanks Victor, I’m glad you like it and appreciate your comment. Have a great day
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