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Unhindered by birds or stars, hawks fly over the sky. In his fanciful glades, pursuing a fog growing heavier. A cloud, he realizes, will fall in an unfathomable spot. Thunder rumbles afar away, and my heart skips a beat. The mists are moving toward the stirring leaves. The mountains are also home to young and ibex. Nothing isolates us from the everlasting cloud. Where the water fills parched rural areas and hearts.
Written: July 20, 2021

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Date: 7/21/2021 11:03:00 PM
Beautiful images of utopia...Delice
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Date: 7/22/2021 3:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Delice appreciate your nice comment
Date: 7/21/2021 8:28:00 AM
Beautiful images wrapped up in an "everlasting cloud." So nice, Lasaad.
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Date: 7/21/2021 1:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Milton, your wonderful words are always uplifting to me, and so appreciated
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Date: 7/21/2021 11:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Milton, your wonderful words are always uplifting to me, and so appreciated
Date: 7/21/2021 6:55:00 AM
Such a beautiful imagery... Thoroughly enjoyed reading it...
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Date: 7/21/2021 11:06:00 AM
Thanks my friend Supraja, appreciate your kindness and your sweet words
Date: 7/21/2021 5:01:00 AM
Wonderful images you depicted, Lasaad. Vibrant poem.
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Date: 7/21/2021 6:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay, your comment is so uplifting, have a wonderful day dear friend.
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Date: 7/21/2021 6:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay, your comment is so uplifting, have a wonderful day dear friend.
Date: 7/20/2021 11:21:00 PM
Delightful description of nature. Loved it.
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Date: 7/21/2021 6:21:00 AM
Thanks Victor, I’m glad you like it and appreciate your comment. Have a great day

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