Forced To Flee

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dancing a jig needing to pee, down with the drawers, got stung by a bee, forced to flee

10/9/2016

Funny One Liner
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Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/11/2016 5:26:00 PM

A 7 for your funny, WINNING one liner, Eve! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2016 3:32:00 PM

big congrats, dear. WIsh I had the time to read a longer poem of yours. I have to run to my treatment now. Bye!!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/11/2016 12:14:00 PM

Congratulations. This was really funny.

Eve Roper
Date: 10/11/2016 12:59:00 PM

Thank you, Rajat Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2016 12:41:00 AM

haha. It conjures a funny image!! Good job, Eve.

Eve Roper
Date: 10/11/2016 1:00:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea hugs Eve

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/10/2016 10:31:00 AM

Lol! Eve this so funny! Great imagery as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest: -)Alexis PS, Til this day I'm terrified of bees. I hear such horror stories, and I don't know if I'm allergic to them or not. I for one don't want to find out.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/10/2016 10:23:00 AM

Lol...a funny one Eve

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/10/2016 9:10:00 AM

I know this is funny but I have memories of going to an old outhouse at my aunt and uncle's and there was a wasp nest in there. Very scary for a little boy.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2016 10:24:00 AM

I got stung on the lip while drinking a Root Beer... couldn't talk for two days

Eve Roper
Date: 10/10/2016 10:11:00 AM

I hated those old out-house you never knew what was lurking in them. My grandfather had one for years or go out in the bush where your had rattle snakes or wild bore.