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Forbidden Valley

Forbidden valley

Twin peaks arousing passion

Tulips on the tips

Copyright © Terry O'Leary | Year Posted 2012

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Darlene De Beaulieu

April 30, 2019 at 1:23 PM

Hello Terry O'Leary, I have just finished reding your poem. As i read this poem I could see these flowers on top of a mountain top. Have a nice day my friend.

February 29, 2016 at 3:54 PM

A titillating haiku!

June 29, 2013 at 3:18 PM

love this clever haiku, Terry. Hope you're having a great day

May 9, 2013 at 10:29 AM

After reading some of your very lengthy pieces, I was surprised to see you dabbling in haiku. This one was very intriguing. The place you described sounds mesmerizing simply because it's forbidden. I can't help, but think that this is euphemism for something else entirely... not a place, but a woman ;) The mind is a mysterious thing...

February 26, 2013 at 3:22 AM

Thinking of bee's.

February 17, 2013 at 12:39 PM

I love the haiku's Terry ;}

Poet Destroyer A

December 21, 2012 at 10:32 PM

Terry, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

December 3, 2012 at 6:56 AM

the mind boggles Terry...excellent haiku.

November 20, 2012 at 6:40 PM

All I can do is :o)

November 18, 2012 at 1:17 PM

Good erotica here - enjoyed! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anishnp5s

November 18, 2012 at 12:38 PM

enjoying this one again - love it : )

Elizabeth Wesley

November 13, 2012 at 6:05 PM

Irisistible seduction that teases unmercifully!

Chidozie Uche O.

November 13, 2012 at 5:07 AM

good image terry, i admire it, forbidden but it got all beautiful things

David Nickle Read

November 13, 2012 at 1:02 AM

Truly words of venery, great work. Read;{>

Victoria Anderson-Throop

November 11, 2012 at 3:52 PM

nice word play...very sexy

Michelle Mac Donald

November 11, 2012 at 12:17 PM

Well oh well.....oh well, a Koo koo Peek 'a boo Haiku, Terry?:) Okay, I behave...nicely done! Mikki

November 11, 2012 at 11:44 AM

great images Terry, great write. Rollo

Andrea Dietrich

November 11, 2012 at 11:16 AM

one of the best I've seen so far in this contest!!! Metaphor is wonderful

November 11, 2012 at 6:12 AM

Somewhat discreet..Great work..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Richard Lamoureux

November 10, 2012 at 6:21 PM

Makes me want to take up mountain climbing. Well done.

Constance La France

November 10, 2012 at 3:48 PM

This is a lovely haiku, well done Terry, Constance

November 10, 2012 at 2:39 PM

love this sensual haiku, my friend - a big winner for sure

Kathryn Collins

November 10, 2012 at 8:05 AM

Oh my dear Terry. make a girl blush will you. Very clever. love, Kathy

Jon A Cavanaugh

November 10, 2012 at 6:26 AM

You write great haikus too. Very nice.

November 10, 2012 at 5:31 AM

Like sex on a pogo stick... bouncy and exhilarating! LOL

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