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Forbidden Valley

Forbidden valley Twin peaks arousing passion Tulips on the tips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/30/2019 1:23:00 PM
Hello Terry O'Leary, I have just finished reding your poem. As i read this poem I could see these flowers on top of a mountain top. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 2/29/2016 3:54:00 PM
A titillating haiku!
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Date: 6/29/2013 3:18:00 PM
love this clever haiku, Terry. Hope you're having a great day
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Date: 5/9/2013 10:29:00 AM
After reading some of your very lengthy pieces, I was surprised to see you dabbling in haiku. This one was very intriguing. The place you described sounds mesmerizing simply because it's forbidden. I can't help, but think that this is euphemism for something else entirely... not a place, but a woman ;) The mind is a mysterious thing...
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Date: 2/26/2013 3:22:00 AM
Thinking of bee's.
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Date: 2/17/2013 12:39:00 PM
I love the haiku's Terry ;}
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Date: 12/21/2012 10:32:00 PM
Terry, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD
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Date: 12/3/2012 6:56:00 AM
the mind boggles Terry...excellent haiku.
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Date: 11/20/2012 6:40:00 PM
All I can do is :o)
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Date: 11/18/2012 1:17:00 PM
Good erotica here - enjoyed! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anishnp5s
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Date: 11/18/2012 12:38:00 PM
enjoying this one again - love it : )
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Date: 11/13/2012 6:05:00 PM
Irisistible seduction that teases unmercifully!
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Date: 11/13/2012 5:07:00 AM
good image terry, i admire it, forbidden but it got all beautiful things
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Date: 11/13/2012 1:02:00 AM
Truly words of venery, great work. Read;{>
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Date: 11/11/2012 3:52:00 PM
nice word play...very sexy
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Date: 11/11/2012 12:17:00 PM
Well oh well.....oh well, a Koo koo Peek 'a boo Haiku, Terry?:) Okay, I behave...nicely done! Mikki
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Date: 11/11/2012 11:44:00 AM
great images Terry, great write. Rollo
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Date: 11/11/2012 11:16:00 AM
one of the best I've seen so far in this contest!!! Metaphor is wonderful
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Date: 11/11/2012 6:12:00 AM
Somewhat discreet..Great work..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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Date: 11/10/2012 6:21:00 PM
Makes me want to take up mountain climbing. Well done.
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Date: 11/10/2012 3:48:00 PM
This is a lovely haiku, well done Terry, Constance
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Date: 11/10/2012 2:39:00 PM
love this sensual haiku, my friend - a big winner for sure
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Date: 11/10/2012 8:05:00 AM
Oh my dear Terry. make a girl blush will you. Very clever. love, Kathy
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Date: 11/10/2012 6:26:00 AM
You write great haikus too. Very nice.
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Date: 11/10/2012 5:31:00 AM
Like sex on a pogo stick... bouncy and exhilarating! LOL
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