Forbidden Love

I laid in bed and dreamt of a Fairy Tale world, but when I opened my eyes a black lace gown and a black crown. I wore well. He knew all my floes and still he called and wouldn't let me go.Your mine he whispered in my ear and drew back with tears. I thought I would be scared. When he walked up to me with his hands out reached. He was vanity and insanity and nothing in-between. I knew what he wanted wouldn't be cheap. Beautiful he still was Christopher the beautiful fallen angel and with one look I feel in love with him. He introduced his self to me and then I could see. Lucifer the ruler of his sea. See what it could be? Will you follow me? And only his beauty I could see. Take my hand. I am your fan. I put my hands in his and he gave me my first dance. I knew I was selling my soul to him and I would never leave his realm. Seduced I was. Using the love he forsake, was this my mistake. Wanting, longing for the fake love he showed me and still I stayed. In this dark place. The love I once longed for out of place. When I looked into the devils face.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 8/30/2015 9:13:00 AM
A great bit of story telling. Have a look through and do a bit of editing. ie; "Fairy Tale" as one example.
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Date: 8/28/2015 9:18:00 AM
This is a different kind of forbidden love and the worst one we can give into! I liked seeing the kind of poem you chose for me to read of yours. It was very interesting, April. Nice to meet you, and I hope you enjoy PoetrySoup.
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Date: 8/28/2015 11:00:00 AM
I am glad you decided to stop pass. It is nice to meet you to and I hope to see you again...Skyy
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