Forbidden Fruit

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                                                            I
                                                          live
                                                          in a
                                                       Paradise
                                                     called Eden
                                                 a serpent slithers
                                                through my tender
                                              branches, Adam and
                                           Eve picked from the fruit
                                         for feedin', no music played
                                       yet they enjoyed love dancin',
                                   when morning came the Sun awoke
                                 they vanished, God reprimanded them
                               and they were banished...the Garden was
                           destroyed forevermore and cause of these sinful
                        parents our lives have many chores, God showed His
                                                     angry wrath
                                                      Paraduse
                                                         Lost
                                                         man
                                                         now
                                                        pays
                                                        cost
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 22, 2010 at 1:29 PM
Satin, these shapes are not easy to do. I have done one, and I shirk at doing others. Good luck in Amy's contest >> James
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May 21, 2010 at 6:13 PM
Nice thoughts. Fine layout
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