Forbidden Fantasy

Let me take you beyond the realms of realism and reality
To a place of nostalgia, and forbidden fantasy

Let’s head for the horizon of harmonious sinful bliss
Discovering the universes, past nirvana’s abyss

Journey into a world of erotic ecstasy
Exploring our bodies beyond their boundaries

Swim in the seas of my seduction and fathom its depths
One mind, one body, one soul, one breath

Ascending above my heavens, exceeding the skies
Let’s quest, outside our flesh, as our spirits fly high

Soaring, rising, defying the laws of gravity
As I ride on the wings of your masculinity



Chiquita Baity
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mister Roboto Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 1:30 AM
This is nice. soup mail coming
Baity Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 3:44 AM
okay, thanks!!
. Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 2:13 AM
Honesty is the easiest language! ha3, Enjoyed this a lot :)
Martin Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 8:44 AM
OK Chiquita - this one DEFINITELY gets my motor running - mentally, spiritually, philosophically and "otherwise". I'd be happy to circumnavigate the universe with you, love:) Also, thought you might like to know I added another verse to "Masters of Poetica." Thanks for your earlier sweet comments. Gotta go work on my masculinity now...Terry Martin
Effendi Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 8:22 AM
WOWWW!
Peranteau Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 6:07 PM
Very hot dear poet ! I'm flustered, and fighting back the thought of....*smiles* ! Splendid write Chiquita ! Have a good one, and as always, I'm enjoying your writes ! Much love, james
Francis Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 1:34 PM
ANODA GUD ONE,its truelly a fantasy
Mitchell Jr. Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 11:43 PM
Well-written piece here. A very appropriate entitlement Chiquita. A real pleasure to read too. Could not have said it better poetess.
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 10:47 PM
A perfect piece Chiquita. I love it. Thankyou for your comments. keep on writing I need more :-)
Benson Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 5:52 PM
Wow! fine, beautiful piece. Thanks Chiamaka.
Sadberry Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 1:50 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Well, If Its Sin Then Never Can It Be Good Yet, If Not Then, What Words Could Define Its Possible True Beauty My Dear, Precious & Priceless, Lovely Chiquita! = I Love The Journey Outside The Confines of Ones Flesh for Many Doors Do So Open Unto Us Then &, Love, As Humanity Has Yet to Truly Ever Know == Thus, Yesss, Walk Amid The Spirit & You Shall Not Succumb Unto The Lust of Sinful Flesh!” === My Love Unto You Always, Jasper *
Sumler Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 9:06 AM
Some lucky guy! Reads like a beautiful romantic voyage...lovely write indeed!
Wilson Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 8:46 AM
I really enjoyed this...gives a very in depth feeling.
Lane Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 6:43 AM
This is going to make him very happy. Tony
Barrow Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 6:36 AM
Beautiful well constructed thoughts of personal pldeasure.....also ty for comment
Osita Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 6:09 AM
This is wonderful! I watch it like a move as I read. I truly enjoyed reading this powerful romantic poem. Thanks for sharing, Chiamaka!
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